|Reviews for The Shielded One|
| panpanpeppermint chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Good story. Shines light on the countless of EDF mooks you kill without a thought. XD
| Downtown Battle Mountain chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
awsome, very good. i wrote a red faction fic to. could yeh review it? thanks
| Hawki chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Overall, the story feels to fall into the trap of telling rather than showing. Maybe it's due to its length, as per being a oneshot, but with so much background being given to Ioseph, it doesn't feel like a natural transition once we return to the present.
On the other hand, this can be considered a pro as well. We get a character's background built up in siginficant detail and then, as per the fate of video game villains, is quickly reduced to cannon fodder. In the context of game mechanics and how an enemy is faceless even if he does have some secret background, this works well.
| Twitchy the Pyro chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I really enjoyed this fanfic. It was nice and short, the typical-size lifespan of any EDF soldier you encounter.
I hope you continue to enjoy writing.
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Nice people, the EDF. Keep writing