|Reviews for The Picnic|
| ComicsNix chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Hi! HA HA HA! That was very funny! I liked the 'graphical' descriptions you made to show us the 'cleaning' process of the character. And the end...how outrageous! You have good ideas, I liked the adjetives you used too. Looks like you spent some time working on this fic. It shows...the quality is very above average. I want to see more!