Reviews for Constellations
1991Kira chapter 11 . 4/10
I have to say this is one of the only fanfics I've ever read where Garrus has a realistic reaction to the whole saving Sidonis thing.
Most fics either show Garrus blindly accepting Shepard's decision like in the game, or the whole "get pissed off and then have angry make-up sex" thing.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/5/2014
one of the best stories I've read so far. Keep up the good work.
Skaiwa chapter 11 . 9/28/2011
Very nice fic here. The first two chapters made me awwww. And the conflict later on was intense.

A great read.
Kitarri chapter 11 . 7/3/2010
One of the **best** Shep/Garrus stories I have ever read!
AboveReality chapter 11 . 2/21/2010
I feel a bit sad now the story ended.. Loved the whole adventure of Calla and Garrus and I'm very moved with the result :)
Jelfia Maleak chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
i loved that story!

just one thing in the epilogue, maybe i missed it but did Shepard ever put a shirt on? i keep imaging her 'naked from the waist up' and walking to Garrus... thought that might be why Gardner had a smirk on. :)

other wise great story. am waiting eagerly for the sequel
dragonlover131313 chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
I got to say i absolutely loved the way you wrote this like a series of one shots. It was lovely I don't know how else to describe it. Made me want to play ME2 one more time and say screw you Kaidan, Ima getting me some Garrus love!
10Roseleaf chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
aw mandible-nuzzle is so sweet.

Very well written, i loved this series :)

Thank you for updating so frequently
gaarafreak chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
I liked it and I'll miss it. That's a good ending.
mslaughter chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
Thanks so much for writing this awesome story! I really enjoyed it. Your use of imagery was great, particularly in chapter 10. I'm pretty new to writing but I understand how hard it can be, so kudos for seeing it all the way through.
Bakageta Koto chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
*standing ovation* Lovely, Hermia, lovely. Thank you for seeing Constellations through to the end. It's been truly an enjoyable read, seeing a one-shot grow like that. I'm very proud of you for the growth you've shown as a writer! May you continue to spread your arms to the sky, unhindered by writer's block and never be discouraged by naysayers.

Before I go, though. A tiny issue. Does Calla get a shirt after waking up, or does she go see Garrus shirtless? ;
HorseyAngel chapter 10 . 2/19/2010
I've been reading this story for quite some time, I apologise for not reviewing sooner, I'm lazy like that and get distracted easily.

Anyway, I have to say I've loved this story the whole way through, it's always interesting to see a new perspective on the Mass Effect playthrough.

Also, you are one of my favourite authors, so I look forward to more e-mails saying you have "updated" or "written" a story!
Cadhlaureen chapter 10 . 2/18/2010
XD

That is all.

And, the Epilogue... I need one!

makes me sad that Jack dies... Reminds me of my first play through... stupid Miranda and Jack fight... messing up my loyalty...

RAH!

Good though :]

very very good...
10Roseleaf chapter 10 . 2/18/2010
ugh *crys* that line, especially what the've been through

"Come on, Shepard...Don’t die on me again.”

*tear, sniffles*:'(

i hope Bioware steals your fan-fic lines.
kiwibliss chapter 9 . 2/18/2010
Can I get a job as your permanent fangirl? Are you hiring?
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