|Reviews for Heart and Soul|
| NarutosBrat chapter 51 . 7h ago
You know, I didn't think of this until Dumbledore was thinking about it, but how come Harry waited until Malfoy cast the curse at Hermione to react? How come he didn't do something as soon as he saw Malfoy step back, and aim his wand at Hermione? Given how much a threat he considers Malfoy to be, and how he normally reacts to threats, with his quick reflexes I wouldn't have thought he'd even give the bastard a chance to even cast his spell.
| NarutosBrat chapter 50 . 17h ago
Forget TNT, you my friend, certainly know how to do drama.
| NarutosBrat chapter 49 . 17h ago
See, this is what happens when you both tempt fate, and underestimate someone as fanatically bigoted and obsessed with his father as Draco was.
Too bad he was panicking too much to think ahead. A silencing charm on his feet, and then firing a silent curse at Malfoy would have gone a long way in preventing the damage Hermione received. Also, he should have cursed the bastard again as he ran over to Hermione.
I guess this is to make up for her not being cursed in the DoM?
| NarutosBrat chapter 47 . 3/8
Yeah, you know the line has been crossed when even Dumbledore says you don't deserve a chance to repent.
| NarutosBrat chapter 45 . 3/8
Sigh, Hermione just had to tempt fate, didn't she?
| NarutosBrat chapter 44 . 3/8
Okay, is Malfoy really that delusional in his bigotry? If someone attacked him, he'd defend himself, so how could he expect Hermione not to do the same thing if attacked?
| NarutosBrat chapter 42 . 3/7
You know what, I'd say that's a rather fitting end to Mister Fudge.
| CTDragon chapter 1 . 3/6
P.S. hope you will write more Harry/Fleur/Hermione stories :) Really looking forward to it.
| CTDragon chapter 80 . 3/6
Awesome. Respect to the author for interesting story and determination to finish it.
| NarutosBrat chapter 38 . 3/6
You know, since it gives you whatever you want, I wonder why no one has ever thought to ask the RoR for ways to destroy Horcruxes. Even if it didn't work, it wouldn't hurt to try.
| RevCorby chapter 80 . 3/4
Finally finished and what a ride. Thank you so much for such a great story.
| RonRR chapter 71 . 3/3
The statements "...no others present—not even the Weasleys—...", "...saw Ginny, burrowed into her father's side...", and "...Ginny left immediately to find her parents who Harry knew were anxiously awaiting news on the success of the ritual..." seem somewhat at odds with each other. Ginny's father makes a mysterious appearance nect to her in the middle of the rutual.
Great ritual and descriptions.
Thanks for writing,
| Arklytte chapter 80 . 3/2
Aaaaaaaaand, I'm done. :)
This is probably the single longest story HP I've ever read, and despite a bit of dragging here and there, and being somewhat overly descriptive, it was genuinely excellent. You brought some unique aspects to the HP universe...I think that this is the only full length story that I've *ever* read that has Tommy-boy being captured/sentenced instead of killed outright in battle. Major uniqueness points for that.
I wish you well in your future endeavors and, while I'm not interested in your (or anyone else's) P&P stories, when you do branch out into other genres of fiction I'll almost definitely pick them up.
| Kairan1979 chapter 43 . 3/1
Fudge killed by Voldy? Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy.
| alix33 chapter 12 . 2/27
"a hint of a mile" - "hint of a smile".
Yay! for how Harry dealt with Malfoy and his goons and Pansy Parkinson.