Reviews for Heart and Soul
Guest chapter 9 . 2/25
dave chapter 20 . 2/19
dumb ass keeps writing harrys a loser and a push over
Mikeblade chapter 21 . 2/19
dumbledore wants the protection of kids left to him he is mad or fully insane he proved in harry's first year by hiding the stone at the school he does not give a rats ass about the students protection or safety.
joe bang chapter 7 . 2/14
another person making excuses for why dumbldore sat on his ass doing nothing to get ready for the dark lords return for a decade he was waiting for harry to come to hogwarts
steve chapter 7 . 2/14
if you have no body then you are dead even if your a ghost or spirt your dead so voldy did die when harry was a baby no matter what form voldy was in after it happened.
bob young chapter 7 . 2/14
um the fact that she's a veela as in your story there is no part veela then yes she is not human
dave chapter 6 . 2/14
it's dumbldore he does not plan them to fight at all just stall until the dark lord can kill harry.
steve chapter 5 . 2/14
draco has family that is alive including his mom and dad so he is not the last anything for the malfoys
harry is the last of the potters as he is the only one alive draco is not the last living malfoy
steve chapter 4 . 2/14
harry should have punched the overbearing cow in the face she is not his mother she should stop acting like it.
Mikeblade chapter 9 . 2/14
i enjoyed this chapter thanks for writing
Mikeblade chapter 8 . 2/14
it's fudge he does foolish stuff all time like when he arrested hagrid just to been seen as doing something he would have no problem attacking fleur in any way he could he is not smart loses his temper fast and thinks he can get away with anything even murder.
Mikeblade chapter 5 . 2/14
thank you for writing
Mikeblade chapter 3 . 2/14
forgot to add in my last review magical britain is part of the icw if they where not how could dumbles be the head whatever the hell he is in the icw so that would mean they have to fallow icw laws so jean had authority get involved with out needing the contract to do it.
Mikeblade chapter 2 . 2/14
that is not true dumble does not act in the best Interest of those in his care because if he did he would not have hide the stone at the school in first year
Guest chapter 33 . 2/1
Kinda losing me here the magical world is irredeemabley corrupt and bigoted the UK especially so.

The pure bloods even the Light in cannon see muggles as amusing preforming monkeys at best.

The only way to save magicals is ironically French revolution style, a root and branch sweep of the ministry and wizengmot. Otherwise absolutely nothing would change which ultimately is Dumbles and the lights objective, stagnation and a return to the status quo of life around 1890.
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