Reviews for Between Lines
Twitchylicious chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
A rather interesting story that I must say I loved. D
HoistTheColours chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
The ending is PERFECT. Such a twist, I loved that.

WONDERFUL job. This is my favorite Crane/Harley fic so far of yours. :D
thebison chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Toccata No. 9,

Really nice, I really enjoyed this one shot. I don't know how you manage to put a beginning, middle, and end into such a short space, but somehow you manage it. Great job.

More insight into the Harley/Jonathan relationship, and this piece really showed a lot of character flaws and complexity. Not only does it focus on the H/J relationship, but also on the duality of Jonathan and the Scarecrow.

I also found the style quite impressive, a sort of slow, sensual rhythm that just /is/. Only one thing I would change, and that would be that I wouldn't use the word 'fidgeting.' It just seems to convey nervousness and not confident seduction.

All in all, really nice job. I look forward to reading more in the future.

Yours Truly,