Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
Nina chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Amazing! I love where the story is going and I love the ideas you have :D
Keep up the good work
Iris chapter 5 . 3/1/2010
Interesting chapter.
Yuki Minamoto chapter 4 . 1/30/2010
*twiches* THIS CHAPTER IS TOO SHORT DAMMIT!

*coughs and regains composer* Sorry, It just irks me when there's just a good story and they chapters are just so short...*frowns*

Yes, we finally get to meet Stel's and Noct's love child! XD

I love 1st POV, it makes it more real.

Yuki

P.S. UPDATE WOMAN!
Yuki Minamoto chapter 3 . 1/30/2010
Yay! Stella's prego!

XD Noct's friends find out so fast. Then again, Stella should hide that "Test" somewhere they can't find it.

They're thoughtful friends. They should be able to help a Prince in need. :)

Oh:

“Noctis …I’m…I’m pregnant"

And

“Define the term secret”

make sure you remember to put in Periods at the end of your sentences! YUKI MINAMOTO COMMANDS YOU TO be more careful.

Yuki

P.S. I can't wait for their child! You should have a pic of her at least! _
Yuki Minamoto chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
*giggles* Something naughty's up in that bedroom of his! XD

Thanks for that. :P

*cough* MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER! I keep telling that to every one of my beta students. They just don't make it long enough. It just makes the story more and more short.

Yuki
Yuki Minamoto chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Noct's such a gentleman. *sighs* Stella, poor her. I wonder what's really gonna happen! *gasp*

Yuki
Star chapter 4 . 1/24/2010
interesting fic, cant wait to read what happens next
Selena chapter 4 . 1/24/2010
interesting chapter, cant wait see more of S/N child.
stella caelum chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
glad that we are able to see one from their childs pov. cant wait to read what happens next
AngelWarriors chapter 4 . 1/22/2010
hmm glad that we got to see their daughter now,hmm sems to be rebelious.

cant wait to read what happens next
iris chapter 4 . 1/22/2010
hmm short, but interesting chapter. although i kind of wondered how their child ended up with noctis.
stella caelum chapter 3 . 1/21/2010
hmm intresting that their child has to remain hidden, but awesome chapter.
Rosa chapter 3 . 1/21/2010
awesome chapter, but stella and noctis, not to mention the fact that the child would have to be kept a secret
AngelWarriors chapter 3 . 1/21/2010
awe poor stella, but awesome chapter
iris chapter 3 . 1/20/2010
hmm pretty good fic, poor Stella having to be seperated from the love of her life. even if it is only for awhile.
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