Reviews for The Outside, Looking In
Nemrut chapter 1 . 2/15
Really enjoyed your take on both characters, seemed very true. Thank you for sharing this.
Red Tigress chapter 1 . 2/5
Awesome story. Sometimes outsider POVs can be weird but I think you did a really nice job. I also love Molly's reasoning for being in the fight, and the nod to Murphy's wrist lock.
Zhor chapter 1 . 2/2
Not bad at all. Nice one-shot.
RoyalBardofCanterlot chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Molly's taking after her mentor it seems.
HermioneWeasley93 chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
This is a nice look at Harry and Molly's relationship. Although when Havisham says "what you said to that boy was entirely unacceptable" it should end with a period not a question mark. Other than that, great story.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Yay we need lots more Dresden files fan fiction, because it is too long until the 27th of May 2014, when "Skin Game" comes out.
ScreenSurfer chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
Really enjoyed it but there's a couple of things that break immersion. When writing an American character, you ought to use American terminology. I know you might be unfamiliar with them, but it does make the story flow better. A sick bay is called the Nurse's Office at school, and the carpark is called the parking lot.
MyRandomName chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Nice story
Ibskib chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
A charming oneshot, you're pretty good at catching the right Dresden tone, I can really picture this as being a small interlude from the Dresden series.
melara chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
haha, that was perfect! :)
LunaBianca chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Fun. :)
Norwest chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Great story! Short, but perfectly in-character and believable.
TheRedPoet chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Beaten up by a girl and threatened by Harry Dresden in a single day?

If he wasn't a scumbag, I'd feel sorry for the guy.

Good writing. I liked that you put it in the perspective of the teacher. Not only was it interesting, but it also served to underline how bad-ass Harry is.
battybiologist chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
:D very good, funny too. Definitely a bro moment there. One thing though - I've never heard "sickbay" used outside of the context of a ship, that might be a local thing for you. As far as I'm aware, generally that's referred to as the Nurse's office (in the US). Unless Barbara is ex-Navy I guess. In which case, nevermind.
Proud to be Plug chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
This is great. Impeccable grammar and spelling, and the idea is well-executed.

All the characters are IC, and it gets increasingly funny as it goes on. I really have no criticism for this. It's great!

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