Reviews for Nightfall
MusicLoverNStuff chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
wow marie. and just to let you know its lil devl as you wrote on my ar in la

ApollosBaby chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Hey, hey Mere! Like I said AFTER A NEW PERSON SPEEKS MAKE A NEW PARAGRAPH! Anyway, put more Rabbit in it!(that's me!)
anonomus chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
i like your enthusiasim for writing but i think it might be a good idea if you improved your dialog other then that keep writing