Uh I think this was the best vampire E/J I've ever read. It was just so real (on their circumstances) , and it was what made it more beautiful. It was a poignant wonderful story. Thank you for this. They were so sweet and adorable. I cried and I laughed and I smiled while reading this book which pretty meant for me that this was awesome.

Wasn't Edward supposed to be gay? When exactly does the "slash" start?

The best j/e I ever read

Oh, thank-! Finally!

Jasper Whitlock! You're being as much of a drama queen as Meyer's Edward! Knock it off!
God. . . This is like New Moon all over again except that Jasper is Edward and Edward is Bella. That sounds weird.
Bah!

Shit, this is good. No sleep for me tonight.

Beautiful story, the angst was hard but worth it in the end. Thank you for writing this and sharing it.

Loved this story!

Great story. Interesting parallel to the Edward/Bella leaving for "being a monster". Everytime a think there can be no new twists or plots left to tell in fanfiction stories I'm surprised again. I realize this story was written a while back but I'm just discovering it now. Thanks for writing.

Loved the story. I read it before, although I didn't recognize it at first. Sorry I only commented here, I'm on my phone and it's hard to type such tiny font. So happy they wound up together. I read a lot of B and E FanFiction, until I discovered slash, I only ready this pairing though, Edward and Emmett don't appeal, Edward and Carlisle, just too creepy. Edward and Jacob, yuck, never liked that dog in the series. Loved the rimming, I'm a dirty girl for rimming umph. Oh yum, you did a great job and my vibrator and I had a fuck hawt smexy time.

That was a magical story! I love the way you rewrote twilight into this masterpiece (and yes, I mean masterpiece!). I think (and shoot me if you want) this was better than the original! That can be because I'm so tired of Bella, but this just felt right. And Bella in this story was amazing! Not at all whiney and annoying as I usually see her!
Great job! I will definitely reread this in the future!

I tried to get into the story so bad, but all of the boy/girl sex just destroyed this story for me :(

Oh my god! Beautiful story... it was so different!

Okay, this last chapter was ridiculously hot! Thank you for sharing this story. I felt like the ending could have been better, but it was very satisfying nonetheless.

&You taught me that Twilight would have been waaaaay better if it was a SLASH. LOL!

Uggghhhhh! I can't believe he didn't die!