Reviews for Darkness Within |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! Please keep continuing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor gohan, it seems like he has to suffer from many things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that was goku! |
![]() ![]() ![]() don't tell me she hits you with a frying pan |
![]() ![]() ![]() a? first he beat them up, and then they beat him up? now that's interesting. |
![]() ![]() It was a great chapter, overall it's one of the best fan-fictions iv'e read in my life |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! Really?! At the good part?! Update soon plz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this :) hope you get back to it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey its Me Catpop24 and That wasn't a bad first chapter |
![]() ![]() i just have 6 more chapters to read than im done,and this has been the best dbz fanfic since slave owner |
![]() ![]() dude chapter 5 was awesome! |
![]() ![]() man these last couple'a chaps made me cry. man i'm a sappy motha' fucker this is the first time i cried in almost 11 years, and im i do love that you made goha not too much like a study-bug like in the shows, and put the gold fighter in instead of the stupid saiya-dork. all-in-all awesome fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I like how you had Gohan and the bad gut and his "bad" side. Hope to read more soon, it's getting good! I also love hoe Gohan and Videl's relationship is going. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great |