Reviews for Teenage Girls
PLEASE chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
CAN U WRITE A STORY ABOUT JIM AND ALLY GOING ON AN AWAY TEAM JIM LETS HER BECAUSE ITS SUPOSED TO BE PEACEFUL AND OBSERVING AND ALLY LIKES THE SPECIES SO HE LETS HER BUT SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS SO SHE GETS HURT BUT AFTER SURGERY OR WHEN SHE GETS OUT OF MEDICAL BAY SHE KEEPS ON HIDING AND?PUSHING HERSELF LIKE JIM!
kinshasadalen chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I love that. I wasn't expecting the ending. Cute. Good job.
newsiesgirllaces chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I loved this story!