|Reviews for Unsuspecting Hero|
| ky13 chapter 1 . 1/14
Very nice story...just a single problem..."Javier and Esposito"?...he is a single person, i.e., Javier Esposito...and he has a partner Kevin Ryan...just saying...good writing though...
| bluedragon1836 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Are you planning on writing more for this story?
| CBTR123 chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
please update soon! this is a great start to a wonderful story !
| petey L chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
wow this is really cool. i love it. please write more
| 2SoulFishbowl chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
This is very well written and captivating! I hope that you intend to update soon!
| Daemith chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Definitely want to see how this scenario plays out- hopefully angstfully. (Angstilly? Angstyfully?) :D Looking forward to the update!
| Cody Smith chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This is a great beginning, can't wait to see more, keep up the good work.
| McFun chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Nice one when are you going to write more I can't wait
| Sparrow49 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Love the start! This 'what if' story angle looks like good fun, and you've got a great, suspenseful start. I look forward to reading more. Post again soon!
| Elisabeth-P chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
continue! nice work!
| andy1990 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Ew,liking this one.:-)
| Divamercury chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Wow. Great start! I can't wait to see where you go from here! Please continue soon!
| Suuz-5-5 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Great start! More when you can!
| Nathan fan chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
This is a very exciting beginning! I really enjoyed the way you wrote about Castle's hidden substance in the first paragraph. I also thought that - "like 2 kids in a 3 legged race" was great imagery. I'm looking forward to more.