|Reviews for If I Had You|
| CiaranTheNerdy chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
You've left me hungry to read more of this... It draws me in and I wanna keep reading it all night long and never put it down. I freakin' love it :D
| The Girl in the Fireplace chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Hey Gandalf ;)
This is vair brilliant indeedy my pally/sis. But one thing: you often type people's names a lot, like: "Aaron looked across at Phillip, when Phillip picked up the report to give to Aaron. Aaron was intimidated by him." etc. ot whatever. I know that isn't an excerpt from your fanfic but you get me? You don't use 'him, her, his, hers' etc. a lot and it gets a wee bit repetitive.
But see otherwise, I loved it! :D I wanna read more! I WILL READ MORE MWOOHAHAHAHAHA!
Read and review Reflections for me pwease? :) pwetty pwease? I really oughtta get a new chapter up actually...
Au Revoir .. XX
| Bralker Stalker chapter 1 . 1/25/2010