|Reviews for Rise of the Immortal|
| kingrobert84 chapter 5 . 2/25
doin awesome are you gonna finish this amazing story?
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/20/2013
Why no update it was a great storey excellent construction flowing plot and perfect suspense build up
| Lu Bane aka 'Adm. ThunderCock chapter 5 . 12/2/2013
Man, I hope you continue this awesome story. You've done well mixing things up to where it isn't some rehash that's been done dozens or hundreds, or thousands, of times.
| Starkiller chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
Okay a parring bettween Benatami and naruto or tsume and naruto or hana and naruto or all three either way ill go for any of those parrings
| Starkiller chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I say add a parring with naruto and tsume or naruto and hana
| uscias chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
| Veldrisk chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
Very interesting story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
| Layla Riddel chapter 5 . 10/8/2013
This is really interesting!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
what a great fic rate it a 10
| onepiecefannumber1 chapter 5 . 8/9/2013
update soon please
| FF's Nightmare chapter 5 . 8/7/2013
Please Updated soon
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
Umm really naruto uzumaki namikaze means (lit) maelstrom of Whirlpools and wind :/ plz edit this it gets kinda annoying reading your kinda bad translation (note this is not a flame, just constructive criticism)
| Ten no kaitou chapter 5 . 6/30/2013
hmm interesting never would have pegged madara as a pervert lol very funny
| Malix2 chapter 5 . 6/29/2013
Interesting. I do wonder what the heck happened in garia's mind.
| gerjan98 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Great story, can't wait for next chapter!