Reviews for The Legend of Yellow
Iloveeevees chapter 27 . 1/5/2016
When is the rest of Yellow's friends coming to the story. She still has to find them...
Iloveeevees chapter 20 . 1/5/2016
Yellow can fight, and has magic. I don't see her actually using it...
I love Eevees chapter 11 . 12/22/2015
In the English translation of the pokespe manga, Yellow's dodrio is named Dody. Some spelling and grammar errors but good besides that!
I love Eevees chapter 6 . 12/22/2015
Is this the world of Legend of Zelda Wind Waker? There are many, many similarities, like the sword attacks, the rupees, and mist. Very clever!
Twinfeather chapter 23 . 8/4/2015
Well Black-san, you ARE currently stuck in the light stone...
Kiri.0.Cloud chapter 32 . 12/18/2014
This is one of the best books I've EVER found, so I'm not going to give up waiting so easily, hope you update soon!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 32 . 12/17/2014
OMG! Good to have you back! I understand where you're coming from. School had kept me too busy to write anything and now I'm addicted to Tokyo Ghoul. You have to read it! It's so freakish awesome and dark!

I am also ashamed of my first fics. Grammar and all it's horrible, but yeah its good to look back and have that happy feeling in your stomach when you see how much you've improved. As for why I've been following your story, the plot was interesting. Wind waker girl! It was so similar to that, but you added your own interesting twist and the story is darker than you think it would be. Which I like also I got curious about Red.

Kay pokespecial talk. Have you played ORAS? Or seen the preview of the ORAS arc? Sapphire received a male Kirlia from Ruby which she called Kiruru, it's evolved in a Gallade now and she wanted to kill Emerald for laughing at her. She hoped both RURU and Kiruru to evolve in a Gardevoir so they would be the perfect team *coughcouplecough* but a dawn stone fell on Kiruru when it was about to evolve. Also she doesn't seem to mind to show her love for Ruby in front of others. Also they all look good in their ORAS design, even Emerald got a new look
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 31 . 4/17/2013
Wow it's been such a long time we heard something about the fairies. Could you explain the rank system they had there again. It's been soo long I completely forgot it.

So the queen is plotting something? Who's then the real bad guy in this story? Are Yellow and the other dexowners getting played? Or is the queen a good one and has she been plotting for the dexowners safety? How is this connected to Gold's kidnapping? And what about Red? So many questions and I don't have enough pieces to solve the puzzle . and my internet connection suck TT
LeikoLauren chapter 31 . 4/17/2013
Oooh, I like this chapter! :) It's nice to see other people involved with the Fairy Council.

Keep it up,! :)

Shea Yuu chapter 30 . 2/16/2013
YAAAY! Finally, updates!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
Yaay awesome chapter and Silver made his appearance! *jumps around happily*
That Rota tribe reminds me of Indian tribes for some reason... I blame it on the huts. So how did Silver ended up in the village? Did they found him unconscious?

Poor Yellow, how many times will she throw up or hear gross stories before she get's back home safely?
Crys is more to pity, since she was the victim of the disgusting things. I wonder what made her that crazy, I hope she becomes normal soon and what's Kitt hiding?

Also I am glad that Mist is back, she's like a Navi. No matter how many times she yells, you can't hate her.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 29 . 2/15/2013
Pisuke is a guy and not a girl, well serebii and Kusaka confirm that. I can't believe I missed this chapter. At least I've read it now. those giant frogs kinds remind me of Xenoblade's brog, only more disgusting and annoying. Poor Yellow, why would water make Crystal go like that and when Will Mist get her senses together and snap out of her depression.

So 5 updates a year, that's not bad I'm going to read the next chapter soon. 2 chapters to go, right? Wait... the end of the year is in... 10 months... wow you must be super busy. Good luck :D
pikaace chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
Geez it must have been a while if Silver can fluently speak the language already. I don't blame Yellow at ALL for getting sick over what the deal with Crys was...I totally would've puked too...ugh...

I wonder what happened to make her change like that? Did an evil Archy take over her body or something? X(

Update soon! I can't wait until Yellow finds everyone else!
pikaace chapter 29 . 2/15/2013
O.O holy SHIIIIIT! That was the most brutal thing I've ever read! Poor Omny and Kitty...I was almost afraid Yellow wouldn't be able to fix them! I was screaming their names when they were getting attacked!

Mist, now would be a good time to get out there and help!
LeikoLauren chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
SILVERRRRRR! He's back! *squee* My baby is back! :)

Hahah, sorry.

I'm so happy you updated. You and this story are absolutely amazing. Really.

Keep it up!

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