Reviews for The Legend of Yellow
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 31 . 4/17/2013
Wow it's been such a long time we heard something about the fairies. Could you explain the rank system they had there again. It's been soo long I completely forgot it.

So the queen is plotting something? Who's then the real bad guy in this story? Are Yellow and the other dexowners getting played? Or is the queen a good one and has she been plotting for the dexowners safety? How is this connected to Gold's kidnapping? And what about Red? So many questions and I don't have enough pieces to solve the puzzle . and my internet connection suck TT
LeikoLauren chapter 31 . 4/17/2013
Oooh, I like this chapter! :) It's nice to see other people involved with the Fairy Council.

Keep it up,! :)

-Lauren
Shea Yuu chapter 30 . 2/16/2013
YAAAY! Finally, updates!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
Yaay awesome chapter and Silver made his appearance! *jumps around happily*
That Rota tribe reminds me of Indian tribes for some reason... I blame it on the huts. So how did Silver ended up in the village? Did they found him unconscious?

Poor Yellow, how many times will she throw up or hear gross stories before she get's back home safely?
Crys is more to pity, since she was the victim of the disgusting things. I wonder what made her that crazy, I hope she becomes normal soon and what's Kitt hiding?

Also I am glad that Mist is back, she's like a Navi. No matter how many times she yells, you can't hate her.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 29 . 2/15/2013
Pisuke is a guy and not a girl, well serebii and Kusaka confirm that. I can't believe I missed this chapter. At least I've read it now. those giant frogs kinds remind me of Xenoblade's brog, only more disgusting and annoying. Poor Yellow, why would water make Crystal go like that and when Will Mist get her senses together and snap out of her depression.

So 5 updates a year, that's not bad I'm going to read the next chapter soon. 2 chapters to go, right? Wait... the end of the year is in... 10 months... wow you must be super busy. Good luck :D
pikaace chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
Geez it must have been a while if Silver can fluently speak the language already. I don't blame Yellow at ALL for getting sick over what the deal with Crys was...I totally would've puked too...ugh...

I wonder what happened to make her change like that? Did an evil Archy take over her body or something? X(

Update soon! I can't wait until Yellow finds everyone else!
pikaace chapter 29 . 2/15/2013
O.O holy SHIIIIIT! That was the most brutal thing I've ever read! Poor Omny and Kitty...I was almost afraid Yellow wouldn't be able to fix them! I was screaming their names when they were getting attacked!

Mist, now would be a good time to get out there and help!
LeikoLauren chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
SILVERRRRRR! He's back! *squee* My baby is back! :)

Hahah, sorry.

I'm so happy you updated. You and this story are absolutely amazing. Really.

Keep it up!

-Lauren
Glaceon1362 chapter 30 . 2/14/2013
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YAY FOR REALLY DISTURBING STUFF
LeikoLauren chapter 29 . 2/9/2013
...I love you. Seriously.

Again, an amazing chapter. You really got the message across.

Also, stay safe during the snowstorm! Make sure to wrap up warm, have some hot chocolate- 'kay, i'll stop now.

Anyways, keep up the good work!

-Lauren
Glaceon1362 chapter 29 . 2/8/2013
ah ok
NUUUUUUUUUU CRYS
plz continue! This is getting good...
and it kinda reminds me of Ni No Kuni XD
Glaceon1362 chapter 28 . 2/2/2013
I'm a little confused as to where Red and everyone went
PokeRescue18 chapter 28 . 2/2/2013
I'm PokeRescue 18 and I came here as you asked:
To be honest, I haven't been reading this story for a long time, since I thought this was complete already. I was genuinely surprised that you chose to continue the story; I was like "having my jaw dropped open" and stuff like that. Well, it is your story after all, so I guess it's really up to you to call the shots.
By the way, you were 4 months too late to reply at the last PM I gave you. I have already published chapter 26 of Crisis long after I sent the message last November. However, I have plans for chapter 27 and I want you to discuss those plans with me on PM. I hope you're reading your reviews; I'll be waiting on the next update!
PokeRescue18
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 28 . 2/2/2013
Most people refer me as Flower, but well xxx is also in the pen-name I have now, so it's fine. I don't make such a fuss about how people call me, as long as it's not insulting. Kinda ironic that a friend of mine on fb asked me how I liked to be called. He normally use a name I took on a MMORPG where we met, but I stopped playing that game because it became boring. Anyway I told him he could call me whatever he wanted to call me so I game him a list of names that people call me. Anyway enough about that let's start with the review.

Yaay for a new update. I loved this, so nice that Crys can finally say goodbye to her first crush and now carry on with the present and heheh Gold. So Mist is secretly jealous with Crys because of her friendship with Yellow, but those dexowners have gone through so much together of course their bond is super strong.

I am thinking about getting Pokemon Y, my sis will be getting the other version and I'll pick Fennekin as starter. It'st he cutest of them all, unless it's evolution suck compared tot he others. I am so happy we got a DS because of the Zelda OOT remake game. It was so worth it. I've read Phantom Thief Pokemon 7, it's a nice manga and better than some other one shot Pokemon manga that I've read. I haven't read the Mezase! Card Master, but I did saw the raws of Pocket Monsters Platinum Mezase Battle King. It wasn't that interesting and I thought it was quite... pointless that manga, but that was because the story was crap.

I really know how you feel about updating. I keep telling myself to write then ext chapter of one of my stories, because I'd also be impatient when I want to read the next chapter of a super good fanfic and when I started writing I updated almost every week and sometimes one day after another. I don't know how I was able to do that... I must have been drinking way too much caffeine. Now it's or once a month or more. I need to try and get my old spark back and inspiration, that's much have been one of the reasons why I update slower. I'm losing inspiration. Anyways I'll stop now because I'll become like a parrot and keep on rambling. Good luck with the next chapter. I'll be waiting for it.

BTW have you read the summary of vol 43 of Pokespecial? The HGSS ending was quite disappointing, but oww well it's the fault of the companies for making Kusaka rush that arc.

Again good luck :D
pikaace chapter 28 . 2/2/2013
Pfffft take as much time as you need to slow down I don't care! ;)

Oh no Mist don't be jealous! You'll have your time to shine! Don't go thinking that your a burden! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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