|Reviews for The Legend of Yellow|
| xxx chapter 26 . 8/24/2011
Yaay for Hitomi she's an cool ranger have you read the webcomic of pokemon ranger and pokemon ranger batonage? They're awesome. I agree Ruby and gold are hot too so is Green. I keep drooling when I think of them in an hotspring. I have heard about the earthquake. When I was playing grand fantasia (thats an cool MRPG i am soo adicted to it you could check it out) one of my guildmembers that he just felt shaking funny thing is he said it was awesome. Soo happy you finally updated yayay
So are Hitomi and the others going to meet te dexholders?
| Forever-Forgotten22 chapter 25 . 6/27/2011
This story is beautifully written, sure there are grammar and spelling mistakes here and there but everyone makes mistakes. An amazing story line you have going here, I love the fact that the girls are for once strong. Crystal as Articuno is ingenious! Yellow is of course awesome. I can't wait to see if any of the other poke dex holders have something 'special' about them. Well Red obviously does...but what?
The many characters can be hard to track at times but with such defining features and moments you can easily tell who is who, not to mention that Fairy chart helped out a lot. I shall wait for the next chapter impatiently. (But that doesn't mean you have to rush. ) Again, great story and I can't wait to read more! (Totally jealous of the cool OC's)
| Dragonfire97 chapter 25 . 6/19/2011
You go to lavender town to get the pokeflute installed on your phone thing, then you go back to vermillion, and use the pokeflute channel (at the top center) to wake up and battle snorlax, then go through diglet's cave, cut down a tree to get onto route 2, now you can go up to pewter, or down and around the deadpan islands (blaine) , then across to fuchsia, fly to cinnabar to meet blue, then go back to viridian after him. Then oak should let you up mount silver so you can battle red, and finish the game.
| NadiaMiki chapter 25 . 5/19/2011
Great story here :D anyway why dont you add white and black (sorry wally) ? I think it will be more fun ha! oh,and I think you shouldn't make too much chapter just for Yellow and Crys (dont kill me !) how about the others? and I simply wanna know when Yellow meets Red hahaha! and of course dont kill me about this critics ! Its just my opinion :D Im waiting for another chapter :)
| Pikachu127 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
A lotta reviews! I'm checking this out!
| Teddiursa97 chapter 25 . 4/24/2011
Me: Yep it did Kari-chan thank you!
| wonderchan chapter 25 . 4/22/2011
Salamence are not green dragons, they are blue, except if its a shiny one...
| Pokemon Fan chapter 25 . 4/16/2011
Hey again! Nice Chapter and I have to say it gives us an insight into the fairy council (That's what it is right?) and how the earth fairy took the news of her students death. I did see one error, which isn't that big of a deal but if you get annoyed by it then you could mess with it. "Except, he clothes were blue." This is when your describing the tide fairy's clothes. I just saw it and knew you would probably want feed back. Excellently written although short and I can't wait for the next chapter. Now I noticed that some people were suggesting ideas and I came up with one also. If in your story Red is working for the Bad guy (I don't know whether he is or not) but if he is, then what I was thinking is that you could have the enemy holding Deoxys who is in a human form. I got this idea from the fact that Deoxys absorbed Red's blood sample that Giovanni had and thus has in a way, half human DNA and half Pokemon DNA. So from that I got the idea of Deoxys being able to transform from a Pokemon to a human by using the DNA from Red. I don't know if you'll use this idea but if you do I think it would be kinda of cool. Anyways thanks for the new chapter and I hope that you have a nice Spring Break. Happy Spring ;)
| Shiki and Ichijo Forever chapter 25 . 4/16/2011
Awesome! Tam Tam is leaving... xD
| xxx chapter 25 . 4/15/2011
Interesting chapter sad too and KAWAIIIII too .. Srry I am in a hyper mood while writing this. I have this super cute song from hatsune miku playing for days maybe oyu can guess what it is XDD. Yeah I have Pokemon HG Soo I guess oyu haven't beaten Green well he's on the old cinabar island and Blaine is in the seafoam island and Brock well that's easy to guess. After that you can go to MT silver and you need rock climb for that to get to Red I don't know the exect way there it's like a maze there. After you beat Red talk to Steven he give you 1 of the 3 hoen starter you have to choose the color. Oak will give you a Kanto starter when you beat Red. You should go to mister Pokemon too he'll give you the red or blue orb depending on the version in my case blue orb (HG version).
I actuelly don't watch the pokemon anime neither too repetive I watch other ones like Rosariovampire for example. The dexholde that dark lord know about must be Red :D I really wanna know how he know's him maybe he's gay XDD kidding xDD I have read tooo many yaoi jokes the last days plus Red is just so smexy.
Ok I am not sure if thats everything I have to write but I'll find out about it sooner or later keep going with the story and have a fun vacation :3
| Teddiursa97 chapter 24 . 4/9/2011
Me: Hi Kari-chan!Ok so actually if the pokemon is ghost type, ti's super effective, and if the oppent is confused Hex is the strongest ghost move, Hex was metioned in the anime this morning, kinda ironic since I read this before the anime. No I haven't heard of Human Alice Sacrifice, is it good? I've only been intrested in anime for bout a year, well if you count pokemon and dragon ball dubs then ever since I was little, but either way there wheren't many mistakes that I noticed. Just a few accidents I think. I knew Neku was innocent though yay for Neku! It's kind of sad about Iris and the other fairies though, but at least the town is safe. Is one of the other dex holders gonna appear soon? Also Platinum I'm sorry, but I have terrible spelling, so sorry. Also Diamond and Pearl, I didn't even know how to say Manzai until I watched the 27th episode of Fresh Pretty cure, sadly it isn't subbed yet, so I couldn't understand the 's gonna be subbed soon though for sure so I'll get the jokes then. Well that's all for now update soon please.
| Pokemon Fan chapter 24 . 4/8/2011
Hi again. I don't have a fanfiction account so this is the name I will use to submit reviews. Very nice chapter and very nice battle scene. I am not that good at seeing spelling errors unless there are very obvious and in your case, there not. I like the flow of the story and I also enjoy the idea of it being not just Pokemon battles but rather the trainers also get a crack at fighting. Now I know that this may be a weird question but is Red going to be an evil character due to him not remembering his friends or is his going to be tortured a lot and then made to fight his friends in order to keep them safe? I know you cannot talk about Red without giving away the story but I would kinda want to know a little about what's happening to him. So if you could maybe make a little part in one of the chapters to give us an idea about what happening to him, I would greatly like it. I do like how you are talking about Yellow and Crystal and their journey to save the land but I like Red as a character and I do want to know what's happening to him. Not because I'm a fan boy or anything I just seem to resonate with the character of Red.
| xxx chapter 24 . 4/2/2011
Nice chapter it felt like watching an anime or playing a video game. Gijinka as boss really cool. It's never to late for things aas they say better late than never. You can have example Emerald being kidnapped and brainwashed as a subb-boss or boss. That will be hard to fight against. I read too much manga hehe and I like the songs you put in the chapter. I looked them up and listened to them they're great. I can't wait for the next fanfic.
PS: The ones who say uou don't write well lets see how good they're at making fanfics. With all the writing blocks and the time you need to write them. I don't even have time to try to write one.
| iSayumix3 chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
| XXX chapter 23 . 3/29/2011
This story is so exitong i want to read more please update again. it's like the pokemon special and legend of zelda the wind waker mixed with some added things I really love it. I an curious about the rest too. I would like it if you put emerald Dia. Black and White in the story too. I love every dexholder so please put them in the story.