Reviews for The Legend of Yellow
Forever-Forgotten22 chapter 26 . 8/26/2011
For a minute I did not get why in the world the Almia region was in such chaos. (I haven't the story in so long so that could obviously be why)

I felt a bit of the earthquake myself, though just a bit of shaking nothing much. Also thank you for the kind comments about my review! :)

W-wait Crystals not connected to Articuno? O_o
AzureLauren chapter 26 . 8/25/2011
Previously called Shiki and Ichijo Forever here!

Hello again! Great chapter, as always. I wonder if Kate will be okay? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Lots of love,

~Lauren
wonderchan chapter 26 . 8/25/2011
Yay, an update at last!

Don't get me wrong, I really LOVE this story. It's all about action, suspense, thriller, supernatural all packed into one ;)

But the only thing I hate is how slow you've been updating :( And from the looks of it, you still have a LONG way to go before completing this story...

I really wanna know what happened to Red, and what will they face in the end...

Well, I'll be waiting and reviewing XD Hope to see an update soon enough XDD
iSayumix3 chapter 26 . 8/24/2011
POKEMON RANGERRRR I LOVEE YOUUU :DDD
xxx chapter 26 . 8/24/2011
Stupid iPod won't let me finish, but I love my I-Chan. Gogo beat Red I trained my whole team to 90 or higher so I could beat him and I did I can't wait till the HGSS arc are out in volumes I wanna see the Kanto dexholders. Green looks soo hot when he's 19 I was like kyaaaa Green-Sama almost fainting and with a bleeding nose XD.. I've played pokemon Black too and I love they finally made the gymleaders useful I say its thanks to pokemon special manga.
xxx chapter 26 . 8/24/2011
Yaay for Hitomi she's an cool ranger have you read the webcomic of pokemon ranger and pokemon ranger batonage? They're awesome. I agree Ruby and gold are hot too so is Green. I keep drooling when I think of them in an hotspring. I have heard about the earthquake. When I was playing grand fantasia (thats an cool MRPG i am soo adicted to it you could check it out) one of my guildmembers that he just felt shaking funny thing is he said it was awesome. Soo happy you finally updated yayay

So are Hitomi and the others going to meet te dexholders?
Forever-Forgotten22 chapter 25 . 6/27/2011
This story is beautifully written, sure there are grammar and spelling mistakes here and there but everyone makes mistakes. An amazing story line you have going here, I love the fact that the girls are for once strong. Crystal as Articuno is ingenious! Yellow is of course awesome. I can't wait to see if any of the other poke dex holders have something 'special' about them. Well Red obviously does...but what?

The many characters can be hard to track at times but with such defining features and moments you can easily tell who is who, not to mention that Fairy chart helped out a lot. I shall wait for the next chapter impatiently. (But that doesn't mean you have to rush. ) Again, great story and I can't wait to read more! (Totally jealous of the cool OC's)
Dragonfire97 chapter 25 . 6/19/2011
You go to lavender town to get the pokeflute installed on your phone thing, then you go back to vermillion, and use the pokeflute channel (at the top center) to wake up and battle snorlax, then go through diglet's cave, cut down a tree to get onto route 2, now you can go up to pewter, or down and around the deadpan islands (blaine) , then across to fuchsia, fly to cinnabar to meet blue, then go back to viridian after him. Then oak should let you up mount silver so you can battle red, and finish the game.
NadiaMiki chapter 25 . 5/19/2011
Great story here :D anyway why dont you add white and black (sorry wally) ? I think it will be more fun ha! oh,and I think you shouldn't make too much chapter just for Yellow and Crys (dont kill me !) how about the others? and I simply wanna know when Yellow meets Red hahaha! and of course dont kill me about this critics ! Its just my opinion :D Im waiting for another chapter :)
goawayI'mdeadhahaha chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
A lotta reviews! I'm checking this out!
Teddiursa97 chapter 25 . 4/24/2011
Me: Yep it did Kari-chan thank you!
wonderchan chapter 25 . 4/22/2011
Salamence are not green dragons, they are blue, except if its a shiny one...
Pokemon Fan chapter 25 . 4/16/2011
Hey again! Nice Chapter and I have to say it gives us an insight into the fairy council (That's what it is right?) and how the earth fairy took the news of her students death. I did see one error, which isn't that big of a deal but if you get annoyed by it then you could mess with it. "Except, he clothes were blue." This is when your describing the tide fairy's clothes. I just saw it and knew you would probably want feed back. Excellently written although short and I can't wait for the next chapter. Now I noticed that some people were suggesting ideas and I came up with one also. If in your story Red is working for the Bad guy (I don't know whether he is or not) but if he is, then what I was thinking is that you could have the enemy holding Deoxys who is in a human form. I got this idea from the fact that Deoxys absorbed Red's blood sample that Giovanni had and thus has in a way, half human DNA and half Pokemon DNA. So from that I got the idea of Deoxys being able to transform from a Pokemon to a human by using the DNA from Red. I don't know if you'll use this idea but if you do I think it would be kinda of cool. Anyways thanks for the new chapter and I hope that you have a nice Spring Break. Happy Spring ;)
Shiki and Ichijo Forever chapter 25 . 4/16/2011
Awesome! Tam Tam is leaving... xD
xxx chapter 25 . 4/15/2011
Interesting chapter sad too and KAWAIIIII too .. Srry I am in a hyper mood while writing this. I have this super cute song from hatsune miku playing for days maybe oyu can guess what it is XDD. Yeah I have Pokemon HG Soo I guess oyu haven't beaten Green well he's on the old cinabar island and Blaine is in the seafoam island and Brock well that's easy to guess. After that you can go to MT silver and you need rock climb for that to get to Red I don't know the exect way there it's like a maze there. After you beat Red talk to Steven he give you 1 of the 3 hoen starter you have to choose the color. Oak will give you a Kanto starter when you beat Red. You should go to mister Pokemon too he'll give you the red or blue orb depending on the version in my case blue orb (HG version).

I actuelly don't watch the pokemon anime neither too repetive I watch other ones like Rosariovampire for example. The dexholde that dark lord know about must be Red :D I really wanna know how he know's him maybe he's gay XDD kidding xDD I have read tooo many yaoi jokes the last days plus Red is just so smexy.

Ok I am not sure if thats everything I have to write but I'll find out about it sooner or later keep going with the story and have a fun vacation :3
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