Reviews for The Legend of Yellow
Teddiursa97 chapter 24 . 4/9/2011
Me: Hi Kari-chan!Ok so actually if the pokemon is ghost type, ti's super effective, and if the oppent is confused Hex is the strongest ghost move, Hex was metioned in the anime this morning, kinda ironic since I read this before the anime. No I haven't heard of Human Alice Sacrifice, is it good? I've only been intrested in anime for bout a year, well if you count pokemon and dragon ball dubs then ever since I was little, but either way there wheren't many mistakes that I noticed. Just a few accidents I think. I knew Neku was innocent though yay for Neku! It's kind of sad about Iris and the other fairies though, but at least the town is safe. Is one of the other dex holders gonna appear soon? Also Platinum I'm sorry, but I have terrible spelling, so sorry. Also Diamond and Pearl, I didn't even know how to say Manzai until I watched the 27th episode of Fresh Pretty cure, sadly it isn't subbed yet, so I couldn't understand the 's gonna be subbed soon though for sure so I'll get the jokes then. Well that's all for now update soon please.
Pokemon Fan chapter 24 . 4/8/2011
Hi again. I don't have a fanfiction account so this is the name I will use to submit reviews. Very nice chapter and very nice battle scene. I am not that good at seeing spelling errors unless there are very obvious and in your case, there not. I like the flow of the story and I also enjoy the idea of it being not just Pokemon battles but rather the trainers also get a crack at fighting. Now I know that this may be a weird question but is Red going to be an evil character due to him not remembering his friends or is his going to be tortured a lot and then made to fight his friends in order to keep them safe? I know you cannot talk about Red without giving away the story but I would kinda want to know a little about what's happening to him. So if you could maybe make a little part in one of the chapters to give us an idea about what happening to him, I would greatly like it. I do like how you are talking about Yellow and Crystal and their journey to save the land but I like Red as a character and I do want to know what's happening to him. Not because I'm a fan boy or anything I just seem to resonate with the character of Red.
xxx chapter 24 . 4/2/2011
Nice chapter it felt like watching an anime or playing a video game. Gijinka as boss really cool. It's never to late for things aas they say better late than never. You can have example Emerald being kidnapped and brainwashed as a subb-boss or boss. That will be hard to fight against. I read too much manga hehe and I like the songs you put in the chapter. I looked them up and listened to them they're great. I can't wait for the next fanfic.

PS: The ones who say uou don't write well lets see how good they're at making fanfics. With all the writing blocks and the time you need to write them. I don't even have time to try to write one.
iSayumix3 chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Cute story
XXX chapter 23 . 3/29/2011
This story is so exitong i want to read more please update again. it's like the pokemon special and legend of zelda the wind waker mixed with some added things I really love it. I an curious about the rest too. I would like it if you put emerald Dia. Black and White in the story too. I love every dexholder so please put them in the story.
Teddiursa97 chapter 23 . 2/8/2011
Me: Darkrai! That's a darkrai! Yup! So some evil person is trying to curse people negativly, and somehow Neku is able to save them and send them to the Lunar Path Way where their pain is eased, but the voice? Is it the bad dude? Maybe it's Joshua trying to save them from the curse. Maybe it oculd be the bad dude too!

Lux: You have too many possibilities listed.

Me: I told you! I use to read a whole lot of mystery books! Plus this is a a good mystery to ponder. Never give up no matter how little reviews you get! Please Kari-chan, plus I don't really hate black, he actually has a good character and white is like blue some. Hmmmm who could hate emerald, he is part of the shorty duo! The shorty duo rules! *pats yellow* You, Saph, Blue, and Crystal are awesome though. Hmm questions.


1. Emerald: Have you ever met a Pokemon Ranger? Did the Prank Master ever meet one?

2. Platnium: Why did a rich lady like you want to go on a pokemon journey?

3. Pearl and Dia: What exactly is Manzai?

4. Wally: Why do you like green colored pokemon?

Ok here yah guys go! Enjoy the questions!
Pokemon Fan chapter 23 . 2/2/2011
Hey, sorry that your not getting reviews for the chapters your writing. I for one, love this story. Its really cool and very entertaining at the same time. My only complaint is that I am very desperate find out what happened to Red. I mean you give us that he waved his hand and all his friends where thrown in different directions. Anyways, your story is great and I did not find many grammatical or any type of dialogue mistakes. Your a great writer and you should continue to write because you have the quality to be writer for a living.

Anyways, thanks for the new chapter and I hope you will not give up on this story. I love it and hope to be able to read a finished version someday.
Shiki and Ichijo Forever chapter 23 . 2/1/2011
Lauren here. Great new chapters! Update soon.
Cruxis' Kingdom Heart Cherubim chapter 23 . 2/1/2011
Whoa... Never expected that. Thought Neku was cursing the villagers... Really nice chapter, but sorry, don't have a question on mind now...-_-'''
Unsatisfied Explosion chapter 22 . 1/31/2011
Ooh... Scary. It's funny cause you would know a Gastly would do that, but you wouldn't expect it to happen right now~. Keep it up! Also, it says that your story is completed, but it's not... Is it my computer or is it just me? I don't know, but you should fix that, because people could get confused, you know?

Teddiursa97 chapter 22 . 1/26/2011
Me: Jimmy! that's who Kenta is! I looked it up and i got jimmy. Oh, so the true mastermind owns a ghastly who uses like dream eater? Or maybe hypnosis? So many posibilities to think of.

Lux: Maybe a whole troop of ghost types is involved?

Me: Neku is innocent yay! She's too good a of a character to be the cause, but I have a bad feeling about Iris for some reason though. Her sprites seem, well dull and kinda up tight.

Lux: You just like the odd characters better than the know it all up tight characters.

Me: is the Pres something world a fancy worl for, ghost, deamon, or spirit? Well I'm happy you updated and I enjoyed this chapter! Now I need to wonder who that girl was. Was she like the gaurdian of the pathway or something? Well bye Kari-chan!
Unsatisfied Explosion chapter 21 . 1/23/2011
Nah, I don't your losing it, your writing style. x3 I mean, 21 chapters, I would've gave up by then. Haha. Oh my gawd. You missed their birthdays. -INSERT GASPING NOISE- lolwut. Anyways, update soon~! You can do it!
Teddiursa97 chapter 21 . 1/15/2011
Me: Go Kari-chan! You can do it. This chapter was good at explaining about Tamashii's past and her friend in a way. *gives Sapphire a cake* Here Sapph-chan. *hands one to yellow* You can give this to Red. I don't think Green would want a cake.

Lux: I bet not.

Me: So Netsu is involved in some way, but I love Netsu! She's so cute and different. Joshua, well i don't really know what to think about him yet. I think you've improved a lot Kari-chan! Especially from the beginning of this story. Don't give up yet, well please update soon! Bye Kari-chan!
Snowflake-lady chapter 21 . 1/6/2011
I think your getting better! It's always a pleasure to read your work. I was thinking that once my computer is fixed (I'm on my sis's) you could help me out with my writing. Sorry if I dont review as much but that's because my comp is broken so can't wait to read more!
Cruxis' Kingdom Heart Cherubim chapter 21 . 12/10/2010
Oooooo! Nice chapter! (Even though it was short -_-... But who cares) Can't wait for the next one!
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