|Reviews for That Night in Altimira|
| Light Laharl chapter 2 . 5/29/2010
pretty good please continue.
| TheForsakenAngelZelosWilder chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
I think they should keep the baby. considering the amount of gald they get fighting monsters, they'd have more than enough to support a kid...though there's always the possibility of irresponsibility. Hm. I don't honestly know, but i do know one thing:
You should update soon w
| Spector29 chapter 5 . 5/6/2010
...I curbed my rick-roll reflex for you, thats how much I want you to continue.
| Pro-life.No wait.Choice.GAA chapter 3 . 5/6/2010
I think a miscarrage would be very dramitic, but that'd be a huge kick in the balls.
| InsaneMexican chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
| AntiSora chapter 5 . 4/1/2010
...That was cruel. I approve, but it was still cruel. XD
I JUST LOST THE GAME.
| AbaloneTimebomb chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
oh god yes, continue! not only is this totally smexy, I wanna know what their kids are like.
| L'Archel-Hotishi chapter 4 . 1/28/2010
Aw...yes, I'm satisfied too. That was really sweet...I'm glad you carried it out this far. Thank you...I loved it so much!
| L'Archel-Hotishi chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
(Reads second chapter) Oh...my...god...what an ending! This chapter was great! I'm actually going to read the other two now.
| Kalana Fox chapter 4 . 1/24/2010
You totally read that topic, didn't you?
Decent story though, I'll give you that. And like I said in the last review, you use too much dialouge and not enough description between the dialouge.
| AS chapter 4 . 1/24/2010
Much better on description, nice final chapter. :3
| Kalana Fox chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Ok, at least I now know I wasn't the only person who thought that...
But...please tell me you didn't read a certain topic on the official Tales forums...because I plan to write a fic kinda like this too...except with Ratatosk ...and without the acual event happening...
Btw, nice job with this, there were only a few problems:
- You had too much dialouge and not enough description (even in 1st person there's always a balance of dialouge and description)
- In several places throughout you missed some words in some sentences...
- I'm decently sure that girls don't actually bleed when their virginity barrier is broken. It hurts, yes, but they don't bleed from it. They only bleed if they're being raped...
| Loser chapter 3 . 1/24/2010
Oh Emil, don't be retarded. Pulling out before you cum does not mean she can't get pregnant. Learn a little about the subject before you go accusing people of things, kid.
| BigBossofMoss chapter 4 . 1/23/2010
This was good. However, I have one request.
I know you said u didn't want Emil telling Lloyd about Kratos.
But...could you do an epilouge chapter where Yuan comes to see the boys and tells Emil and Marta a very detailed retelling of Kratos, the Kharlan War, Martel, Anna, and the previous adventure(ToS 1)
I wanted that to happen as I played through the entire game but no one ever told Emil and Marta what REALLY happened.
| KStheD chapter 3 . 1/23/2010
Hee, Emil fainted. Hahahahaha... That made me snicker, LOL.
Ah, but Emil doesn't really strike me as teh type to wanna kill it... I mean, the kid was gonna kill himself to atone for a murder he -didn't- commit, right? So how could be be okay killing a defenseless, helpless, unborn child? -His- child, no matter the fact that Marta kinda forced him into it?