|Reviews for Some Little Girls|
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/6/2012
It is so great to have the opportunity to tell you how much I enjoyed this story, as I said, I just couldn't bring myself to read the first two, too upsetting to remember what Bella went through, what she put Edward through, I probably should refresh my memory of the first time he got back together with her, but I just can't bring myself to endure their pain again, thank you for the lovely walk down memory lane and for setting the story in the Philly area, great story Rachel Garber
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/6/2012
Awww more awwws here, loving our Edward you make him seem so real I frequently forget that the stories aren't about real ppl how they are brought to life thank you RG
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/6/2012
Awww, our Edward adores his baby girl, love at first sight, so sweet, ah I love this story, but I really can't to back and read the rest, too heartbreaking to even remember, besides I really don't feel like decking Bella right now!
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/6/2012
Wow, holy cow, well I forgot that part too, R G
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/6/2012
Okay forget that I said that any other was my favorite chapter, this is the one I never forget, the one I always remember when I think of this whole story, this is the sweetest, most tender, most beautiful Edward of, well there are other Edwards I love, but this is up there in the top 5 or so. Rachel Garber
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/6/2012
Geez, can Edward get any sweeter, can we ever find a man a wonderfully sweet as this adorable man, oh yeah, well he is already taken. I am so glad that there is one woman on this earth who knows exactly what it feels like to have him as her own, to love him and for him to love her, I know I do manage to get the real person mixed up with the fantasy, but that doesn't make it less swoonworthy. Rachel Garber
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/6/2012
I just about peed myself laughing when I was reading that I forgot that those two crazy kids forgot to lock the door, but Edward's response, priceless, so sweet so tender. very nice.
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/6/2012
Oh this is lovely, except Bella doesn't know what is going on next door yet, as I recall, she will have kittens. Great story. very nicely done.
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/6/2012
OMG, I just love this abt Esme, she is such a dear person, at first I was mad at her, but I forgot how this story progressed, this is beautiful, I should go back and read the rest over again, but don't think I can bear the emotional upheaval of Bella breaking up with Edward again, and not feeling like if she was real, I'd want to smack her in the face, very good ch
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
Awww, she is pissed, she is so fucking insecure abt his money, at least the canon Edward didn't agree to a prenup. I forgot about this one.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/6/2012
She really does get on my nerves, Bella is just so annoying sometimes. Someone posted a photo of Rob sleeping, he had a Teddy bear next to him, whether that was real or maniped, to see him sleeping, well, I do frequently pull up mental images of him in varioud photos, whether for magazine photo shoots, or the RC or whatever, this was nice, because we never see him with his eyes closed, he doesn't sleep in Twilight, or in any other movie that I can recall. Ahh, that man really owns me, and when I read these stories, I always see him as the various Edwards, except for the serial killer, that never worked for me very nice ch, hope she gets over her damned insecurities soon. Rachel Garber
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/6/2012
This is nice, really nice, as I made clear before, I adore this Edward, very sweet, too mature for his own good when he met Bella, yet knowing she was The One, nicely written, this is shorter than the others, so I just may drift down memory lane again. Rachel Garber
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
I love this chapter, I adore this Edward, the man who grew from the boy whose heart Bella broke, and then got her back because he knew she was "The One" I read all kinds of Edwards, but these are the ones I love the most,and the best. This is a very precious Edward, his love for Bella, despite her breaking his heart, his insistence that they were meant to be, and to mean it. In so many ways he is like canon Edward and I dearly love him for that. Edward will always be in my heart. Someone recently asked what was my favorite movie, and I pretended I didn't know, cause at 68, it seems kind of silly, or embarrassing to say, but the Twilight movies will always be my favorite. Always. Rachel Garber
| careaz8 chapter 14 . 6/25/2012
Carissa is the best name ever! Love the whole AA5 series...well written!
| cutealy chapter 16 . 6/2/2012
Totally awesome and beautiful! I loved both of the stories. Be good to catch up with them again in the future! Thanks for sharing and keep up the fab writing! Aly xx