|Reviews for A Visit to Wammy's House|
| Angel chapter 27 . 4/16
This fic is actually amazing! I love almost everything about it! The only thing that bothers me is the fact that Near didn't relise that the names Mello and Matt were using were their real names, seeing as he's a genius. But that hardly matters really. I love this story, and even though I don't have an account here I'm still gonna be checking regularly for updates!
| asdfgh chapter 15 . 1/24
| gaada chapter 27 . 7/31/2014
Pllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeeeee make more
| Akronite chapter 27 . 5/30/2014
I realize this fic will most likely never be updated again though I would like to leave at least one review.
This is, in short, amazing.
Your writing style is great, the plot is imaginative and you manage to keep everyone in character, something that cannot be said for a lot of the longer fics out there. The unique spin and insight on the characters by writing in each of their POVs is also extremely interesting, not to mention, well done.
I guess us as the readers will have to make up what happens next...
Do Mello and Matt crash the plane?...
...Does Misa kill anyone (Namely, L)?...
...And Near. What happens to him?...
...So many questions.
Oh well, thank you very much for writing this. It is definitely one of the best Death Note stories I have ever read, and although it is not finished, the last line in this chapter could be considered final while leaving it up to the readers imagination as to what happens next.
May I also mention the moments between couples? They were adorable! Especially the Matt x Mello ones. I can also say that you made me fangirl pretty hard throughout this story!
Anyway, that's enough from me, I could go on about this all day c:
I'm off to read your other fics now,
| machi-pan chapter 27 . 9/26/2013
why...why...why did you stop...?
| Dragon of the flames chapter 27 . 8/24/2013
Great story. Keep it this way :)
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/24/2013
Wait...how can L take his short off when he's handcuffed to Light...
| Review writer chapter 27 . 5/1/2013
That. Was. Awesome.
I love the ending.
3am and my iphone is a 14% you owe the next chapter. I will say this with out sarcasm; thanks for the loss of sleep. Your story rocks.
| Review writer chapter 26 . 5/1/2013
No way! You so not predictable. Matt and mello joy riding plane is brilliant. Thumbs up. Although... Are they really that stupid. As for light... is it that time of the month? Yikes.
9% sure L is going kill mello (not literally)
43% sure its not going to end well
6% sure next chapter will envolve near being off
By the way, i am relitively convinced that apriximately 49% of people who read this, it took them and least 5 chapters to realise what POV stands for.
For your information; my fav Point Of View is from matt.
| Review writer chapter 23 . 5/1/2013
I love this chapter! Its all innocent! Font be depressed i approve of mellos fake caffiene rush, hippy rainbow lady, nears baggage tower and particularly matt. Speaking of matt they sneak into the luggage compartment and get all lovey dovey. Lovey dovey for lack of better discription. Thats my idea but its pretty pointless seeing as youve all ready written the next chapter...
| Review writer chapter 20 . 5/1/2013
I dont like glue.
The ending rocked.
They are beyond adorable.
And you are a genius writer!
Yay the world is good.
| Review writer chapter 19 . 5/1/2013
Reviewing takes to long! I wanna read next chapter! But i review coz you said please. You owe me.
Argh! My iphone is at 34 percent and its 1am!
Thanks... I think.
Regardless that was pretty cool. What is he doing with that cherry! A million suggestive things... I want to trie and tie cherries with my tongue now. Sounds hard. Its near still watching? Finally they stop denying! But what about near?
Nicely done how ever... Make L more...
| Review writer chapter 16 . 5/1/2013
Ah! You uke-ified light! No! That goes against his personality at makes his kira 0.1%!
Its like hiving him a lolly pop and a halo. But then again... L Wouldnt be a good uke coz he's too... Controlled... But so is light.
I loved matts reaction! It was genius. Laughed so much. Matts heteosexualaty 4.2 % dramatically dropped. Any way great job. I am now watching my iphone battery level slowly seep away whilst i read your genius creations.
| Review writer chapter 15 . 5/1/2013
Typical. Bet matts enjoying it. Thats going to make things all awkward. But it was a good idea. Cupcakes are always framed for interrupting intermit moments between "friends" great job. Throw the cup cake at him. Why didnt he knock? I loved matts reaction.
| Review writer chapter 14 . 5/1/2013
I love the cliff hanger! Epic! So exciting! Yikes who is it? Heres my genius deduction.
Probobly near. He has plaudible reason to seek L. However its not near like to swear at L.
Roger also has a valid excuse to catch them. But old men dont swear. Mello is likely to swear.
If you suddenly made miss appear out of know where light is screwed.
Cant be a shimigama. Its not watari.
Mello and matt are to busy being cute. That being said it could be matt because mello is presumeable sleeping.
I havent missed anyone? Retorical question.
I will read and find out...