I was so hopeful that this would turn out to be a Bella/Carlisle story, so I'm a little disappointed, but it was still good. I'd love to see you write an alternate ending where she lets Edward down and goes to find Carlisle. OR...it would have been okay if Esme had really changed her ways and she and Carlisle found each other again, so he would have a HEA as well. I just have a soft spot for Daddy C and want him happy!

I’m not sure that I would be able to face Carlisle again while being with his son.
What breed of dog is Taylor?

Your rendition of Carlisle is very good and I must say that I have never thought of Carlisle being a sexy person before. This is shedding a whole new light on my view of him.

I’m not a big fan of Carlisle and Bella tales but this one chapter may have changed my mind.

This was very well written, I feel terribly for Carlisle. I feel sad with the way this ended, I know anyway it would have ended would have been sad. This is such an insane situation and I don’t even know how to feel about it. Also whatever happened with Esme? I wish we had a follow up on that!

This seems so wrong, they’re laughing and having sex before Bella has even talked to Carlisle. I feel like Bella needs to take space away from both men. And it seems like Edward is choosing Bella over his own father

I am shocked at how selfless Edward and Carlisle are, ready to give up their girl for the other person. They definitely how a strong bond. I’m sure Bella will end up with one of them but I sort of wish she doesn’t, I feel like as selfless as Carlisle and Edward are, if one of them continues to be involved with Bella, I don’t think their relationship will ever be as solid as it once was

I don’t know how this situation can be rectified wow!

This doesn’t even seem like much of casual dating anymore, there’s way too many feelings on both sides of each party and man this is gonna end badly for these three:(

Yikes they are best friends as father and son, if Bella chooses one of them, I don’t know how their relationship will ever be the same between the two men

It seems like Carlisle is the more “practical” choice in regards to how sweet he treats Bella but it seems Bella has a stronger connection with Edward although this downfall is sometimes the way he acts but it seems their chemistry and connection is better. Overall though I’m just curious how this is all going to blow up since they are father and son seeing the same girl. I can’t imagine this can go well even though both of them know Bella is seeing another man. Seems like it’s going on too long. She’s going to break one of their hearts. To me it seems like she should really be with neither of them in the end.

Unfortunately, I have to abandon reading this story. I can't get into BxE while BxC is going on. Especially with E and C being what they are to each other (wont post spoiler if someone hasn't gotten this far). It's unfortunate, because I love the way you two write, and the banter in the A/N is a nice bonus. I'd love to see these as two separate stories unrelated to each other. That would be something I could read.

Oh oh, poor Carlisle! My heart breaks for him and that last outtake was something else

Carlisle does funny things to my tummy. BXC is my very favourite

I honestly don't get this... So say if they weren't related... Would it still be not Bella's fault? That's ridiculous.