|Reviews for Dirty Little Secrets|
| LizziePaige chapter 17 . 6/19/2013
As my mother often said "it's always fun until it ends in tears" and I knew one of them would end up heartbroken. Poor Carlisle, he really did/does love her too. I am glad that it was E&B in the end as they made a great couple but I am feeling the heartache. A great story, so well written. I also loved your Alice and Jasper. Thanks for such a great story and for sharing it with us :)
| LizziePaige chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
OMG the son and now the father...this is very interesting. I can see tears on the horizon, not sure who will be hurt the most here!
| jubblet chapter 19 . 5/14/2013
Great story. So glad it ended with a certain couple. So glad for an alternate ending too. So many times the who will she pick ends horribly for me. Nice to have two endings so everyone is happy. I assume because I haven't read the alternate...
And while it was crack I loved Ch 19. Thank you for making fun of Bella's tight vag and tiny hands. The stupidity of the baby's name, size and ablility to talk. And the utter ewwww of Jacob being soulmates with a baby.
I know it's been awhile but please write a few more out takes, future takes and all that you mentioned at the end of the story. We guys wrote an awesome story
| kokobun chapter 7 . 5/10/2013
okay, so i NEVER stop mid-story to review (i suck, i know), AND i almost never read a fic that doesn't distinctly name "bella and edward" in the summary (cuz i ship them loyally), but i took a chance with this one and i gotta say that i am already in heart fail mode if somehow bella can't end up with them both-i know it would be sick, unrealistic (smile) to write, and just oveall f'd up...but that's probably what u wanted the reader to feel in the first place, right?
| MissSherrie chapter 15 . 4/18/2013
Ok, so I haven't reviewed any chapter before this because I tend to just plow through, but holy he'll, that HURT!
I have no idea where you're going from here and I'm almost afraid to find out.
| FeatheredPhoenix chapter 18 . 4/15/2013
I can't find the alternate ending?!
| kerry chapter 16 . 3/31/2013
praise God for the alternative ending.
| Kerry chapter 15 . 3/31/2013
pullin' for Daddy C, off to find out. I'm scared!
wonderful, wonderful story.
| cassie1550 chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
I think I'm gonna see what gives me an allergic reaction so I can trawl ER rooms for Drs McYummy and their cotton balls
| cassie1550 chapter 19 . 3/22/2013
Crying with laughter here now...it's osoooooo gross. Cardwardella? LMAO!
| gatorgrl91 chapter 19 . 3/4/2013
Off the wall, out of character, but funny!
| gatorgrl91 chapter 15 . 3/4/2013
Loving ur little story! So sad right now and I have NO IDEA how a HEA will come out of this, but u promised so I'm holding u to it! :)'
This bears repeating...*Holy crap, you've converted me to Team Carlisle!*
*I'm still Team Edward all the way, but your Carlisle is HAWT!*
| Toni Masen chapter 19 . 3/1/2013
Well what a situation to be in. I'm glad you chose Bella and Edward to be togeather, because that's how it should be! This is an amazing story and now i'm really late going to bed as I HAD to read it all in one go. Brilliant. Thank you for writing.
| Bevey99 chapter 16 . 2/28/2013
Like this ending better. Don't do well with B & C.
| middlewife chapter 19 . 2/2/2013