|Reviews for Cool This Burning Up|
| canyouplaypretend chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
This was a really great piece! I loved it. Keep up the good work!
| BornBlindtoBeauty chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
aw, that was cute XD
| AngelicKat445 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
| OriensRex chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
I really liked this one. They were in character and it felt real. There were some grammar issues but nothing serious. Otherwise, it was perfect. I'll be reading more of your stuff for sure.
| Zenia chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
| okapis chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Hey, thanks for writing this for me! It was nice and in character and was actually not as fluffy as you'd think. I've seen way floofier...xD So don't worry!
My grammar nazi-ism kicked in.
"This leaved the question of why she was jumping those every few seconds."
'Leaved' should be 'left'.
"Down the hall she could see a sliver of light, just around the corner and she could see it."
I'm...not sure what's happened here. xD
"There was at least two light bulbs ahead that lit the entire hall."
'Was' should be 'were'.
I think that's it, but I probably missed something. There were a few awkward sounding sentences, but that's not uncommon. Again, I enjoyed it, and I could see this happening.
| SeventhTatar chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
FLUFFY FLUFF IS FLUFFY! you know, my friend sent me an email that was a fic, and that's what she entitled it. CUTE!
| Wolvmbm chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Cute fluff, especially during a scary moment. :D
I mean what is much more scarier than falling in love ? :(
Please do keep up the good work upon such great ideas for future reads. ;)