Reviews for My Girl Friday
icthestrals chapter 14 . 3/30/2013
Absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for this beautifully written and captivating story.
seekerchasing chapter 14 . 12/5/2012
Such a beautiful ending. Perfect proposal for them, as well. I absolutely adored this story. So well written and the characters and their relationship were gorgeously developed, I really got into their heads.
Hev99 chapter 14 . 10/14/2010
Aww so beautiful! I'm kinda glutted I ran out of your stories to read, but I am privileged to have read them!

This ending was so perfect leaving us to imagine what came next! Unless of course you decided to write more... I can't say as I'd object to that! ;)

You're wonderful, sweet people and so very talented. I wonder if you realise how good you are! Thank you for sharing your words so freely! You know I love every single one! And your review replies make me almost as happy as your stories!

Keep writing! You're amazing! xxx
Hev99 chapter 13 . 10/14/2010
PHEW! This has been playing on my mind since I went to bed last night! I'm so glad he got there in time to stop them from hurting her. And huge girl power points for not having her be the damsel in distress, but help to get herself free. I love how strong and awesome she is!

I'm so sad, I'm running out of chapters, only one left! :(
Hev99 chapter 12 . 10/13/2010
OMG why! Why do I do this to myself! I think, " I know, I'll read a chapter of MGF before bed. Their words always soothe me so I'll sleep like a baby tonight." Then I read it and you do THAT to me! This is incredible! It has everything, romance, intrigue, family, great characters, MAJOR HEARTFAIL! Just brilliant. You own me so badly it's not even funny!
Hev99 chapter 11 . 10/12/2010
Oh thank Christ! I'm so glad he's physically okay!

I love his emotional vulnerability at the end of this chapter. His distress at the thought of her being hurt because of his work is so beautifully written. I hope nobody gets hurt any more! Especially not my lovely Carlisle! :S
Hev99 chapter 10 . 10/12/2010
Oh my God! Apparently it was a big mistake thinking I could fit in one more chapter before I went and got stuff done! I have to go away wondering what happens next! Don't think I'll be concentrating too hard this afternoon!
Hev99 chapter 9 . 10/11/2010
OK I spent pretty much all of this chapter trying to work out what's going on, and who is responsible for the demands, but I've decided that I'm just gonna sit back and enjoy the ride instead!

I'm in a fairly foul mood today, and your words soothe me! I'm smiling like a Cheshire cat now, which is appropriate considering where I live, lol!

I can't wait to find out the answers to the mystery! xxx
Hev99 chapter 8 . 10/11/2010
So I might have accidentally a little bit read another chapter instead of doing my work. If anybody asks, I'll blame you two, okay?

You were so right about loving on Edward's parents! I loved the anti-septic story! Bless, I could totally picture little six/eight year old Edward sitting on the steps waiting to die!

Now I HAVE to work! More later hopefully!
Hev99 chapter 7 . 10/11/2010
Ooh Jazzy might get out! My second favourite Cullen! :D

I'm intrigued about the diary he found. I want to read more but paperwork and packing are calling my name :(

Loving the story so far! xx
Hev99 chapter 6 . 10/10/2010
I love love love how as soon as he saw her he knew that she had been speaking to Jasper. He's such an awesome character, with so many sides and so much depth. I adore that.

The photograph thing was really sweet. Giving them all a new memory, including Rose. And of course, as usual, your word sex was beautiful and perfect. Brilliant chapter!
Hev99 chapter 5 . 10/10/2010
Oh my word! You for real made me tear up with this one! ME! I have a heart of stone and I almost cried! The re-union was so perfect; I'm so happy that you did it that way. I'm in love with Edward's parents already, and I'm 99.9% sure it's nothing to do with my Carlise obsession! I love how straightforward they are with one another in this story. People actually communicate in a real way with each other and it's so nice to see.

Perfect as I've come to expect now! xxx
Hev99 chapter 4 . 10/10/2010
Squeee! I'm so excited to get back to this story! I missed 40sward and Rosie!

I love their relationship, they're both so fiery and passionate, but loving and caring with each other at the same time. She made him grovel for forgiveness, but at the same time she was sensitive to the pain he felt over his parents. I love that.

This line: 'Today, I needed to have my wits about me, because today was sure to serve up a big fat generous slice of humble pie, topped with a heaping scoop of heartbreaking accountability.' made me laugh quite loud! His thought processes are hilarious and I ran out of lines throughout the chapter that I wanted to quote at you. I'm doing this on my phone and have no idea whether I can copy and paste more than one at a time!

So perfect that I almost wanna set up my own auction JUST so that I can buy more of your words!
Hev99 chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
You'll have to forgive me I'm reviewing this on my phone so it will probably be chock full of mistakes!

It was so awesome to see the more vulnerable side to Edward here. His reaction to talking to his mum was just adorable! And I loved the idea of her scrapbooking all his newspaper clippings :)

Rosalie was just perfect! I loved that she turned to her girly friend for comfort and advice and of course, every girl's best friend in times of trouble: Pie! What struck me the most though, was that although she walked away and was raging mad at him for what he said and did, she didn't just walk away thinking it was over. Too often you see that in FF where they have one little fight and it's all over. I love that your characters have more depth than that and are actually in love. The proper kind! She was annoyed, yes. But she was also trying to work out ways that she could help with the situation at the same time! It just shows to me how much depth your characters have, that you have them responding appropriately to situations rather than haring off at the deep end!

I can't wait to see how they make up and to meet mummy and daddy Cullen! CARLISLE! Squeeeeee!

As always you are all things awesome and I love ya! 3
Hev99 chapter 2 . 8/31/2010
Oh Edward, Edward, Edward! *Shakes head sadly!* It was all going so well and then BAM! I'm intrigued about his relationship with his father! Can't wait for more!

My favourite quote from this chapter, which I decided not to Tweet for my father was this one...

"I adored her in red, but I absolutely loved her in nothing." I love these two! I love the way they hide their utter adoration for one another behind snark and sarcasm! And as always I love the playlist!
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