Reviews for An Awkward Beginning
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 9 . 8/28/2023
Nice work with this story! The development was really good and I'm glad they have their happy ending hehe. I really enjoyed reading this!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/8/2023
It is a fantastic story. Thank you. You are soo creative and poetic.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2023
muito bom. adorei.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/4/2022
I know this is 2022, but awwww this story is so sweet. The ending was a bit rushed. But it felt whole. I need more sweet Naruto~
ryochi24 chapter 1 . 10/4/2021
I love this story :)
A.S.-sama chapter 9 . 4/29/2021
Nice ;]
Guest chapter 9 . 1/7/2021
I really adore this fic! I love the unconventional way they came together and just the way you pieced each chapter together. There’s so many things I wanna say because I really appreciate you completing this AMAZING WORK OF ART but alas I’m am left dumbfounded and without words ... so thank you so much! It was one hell of a glorious ride reading this
Guest chapter 8 . 1/7/2021
Holy! I was not expecting the end of this chapter! I know you said this chapter wasn’t your fav but it may damn well be my favourite! I love all of these chapters so far really - god tier story imo - but the humour in Naruto’s letters, the growing affection, snippets of their team mates and the CLIFFHANGER! Every word is just like woah!
Fluff-maniac chapter 9 . 1/15/2020
Best naruhina story!
Aelibia chapter 9 . 12/15/2019
v sweet, got cavities, 11/10 will read again
Aelibia chapter 7 . 12/15/2019
cuuuuuuuute
Bluewarrior3 chapter 9 . 12/9/2019
This was amazing . i love naruhina. But i have to say the sakura parts i didnt like at all. In most naruhina fanfics ive red Before she awalys turns out to be a selfish person. The way she said "he will be mine in the next life" pshhh bitch please. I have never thought sakura deserved naruto. I like the way this turned out and i loved how you made naruto finally show his love when hinata was in the hospital and how he finally let out his feelings towards her by him tell sakura how he feels about hinata. You did really good. Thank you for the story
kawaiihinahime chapter 9 . 1/12/2019
the ending is so cliff hanger, but nontheless, i love the story, the naruhina moments are so sweet and cute
Fishies2 chapter 7 . 5/13/2018
this is so so sweet
Fishies2 chapter 5 . 5/13/2018
:))))))))))
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