|Reviews for Definitive|
| GinTsuki chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Oh my! Number One is the best. I'm so saddened she never made it into the main cast. She would have been too much like Spock though... I suppose.
| Trekkie2 chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I love the way you write and I love your stories!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
LMAO, that was awesome. "Worst date ever"*snorts*
| Amethyst Asheryn chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
LOL. I like this.
This is the only story I've found so far which features these characters. When I saw it in the story list I was really surprised. :)
But I like it! The conversation and Pike's nonplussed reactions, especially.
The only typo I can see is this:
"he trailed off, suddenly conscious of exactly how the big a hole he had dug himself."-I don't think there should be a "the" in there. Also, personally I think it would sound better as "... how big a hole he had dug for himself."
Thanks for writing!
| MJ chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Love Pike & Number One stories. Thanks for the great story!
| JAGNikJen chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Oh, wonderful. I was so glad to see another story from you.
What happens at the end of the date...?