Reviews for Time is an Ocean in a Storm
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29/2014
Too much suspension of disbelief, and too much information packed into your chapters. You should ease your reader in these things and not jam them down our throats. A couple of paragraphs and poof you changed the entire Naruto back story.. Smh
js chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
it's not much of a choice, when you don't give the "hero" a choice a to begin with...
js chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
you lost me as soon as you wrote "kileena the queen of time, the girlfriend of the sage"
you've got to be kidding me...
Anonymus chapter 24 . 8/12/2013
That was totally awesome!
I love the way you kept Naruto and may as a two people relationship, because a lot of authors who write these kinds of stories ruin them by making them a harem.
God Of Cake chapter 3 . 8/7/2013
HAHA poor poor Kimimaro being called the bone guy
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
This is confusing as hell.
gamelover41592 chapter 24 . 5/27/2013
that was awesome
Dragon-of-Chaos chapter 18 . 3/16/2013
you use a lot of zelda refrences
Kyuobou Zetsumei chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
Chapter Six
So far I see Avatar the Last Air-bender, for some reason Zelda, and God of War so far...
I LOVE this story!
Kyuobou Zetsumei chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
I literally fan-girled when I read the third option... I fail.
ANYWAY! First Chapter and I'm already hooked, it's not everyday this happens to be so I thank you. JA NE!
Guest chapter 19 . 10/14/2012
.FUCK you bring in the great deku tree! thats so screwed its funny!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
Did inari get all of kratos's magics cuz if he did he would be even more over powered than he already is
luna sanguine chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
He should yell when Pein says he is god if you are a god the I AM THE GOD OF WAR it would be awesome
luna sanguine chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
I love you're song choice
Guest chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
what i don't understand is why inari came together for the journey..?
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