Reviews for Time is an Ocean in a Storm
LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 2 . 1/21
I'm dropping it. Everything seems too artificial, things are explained after the fact in a manner of oh by the way that reminds me of kids trying to trump each other's imaginary characters over which one is more awesome...

Content wise the first two chapters did not offer me anything that gained me any trust in this being a story for me.

I look forward to seeing your progression in future stories however. Mostly because your concepts are interesting.
bluedog44 chapter 2 . 7/17/2017
So in English is it Taimu Kohaku, or Kohaku Taimu?
TyquanUchiha chapter 1 . 12/13/2016
sasuke is not a traitor if anything almost everybody betrayed him
hubnnick chapter 1 . 8/5/2016
This one is good what's your next one
Elements1999 chapter 24 . 12/16/2015
Awesome story. I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29/2014
Too much suspension of disbelief, and too much information packed into your chapters. You should ease your reader in these things and not jam them down our throats. A couple of paragraphs and poof you changed the entire Naruto back story.. Smh
js chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
it's not much of a choice, when you don't give the "hero" a choice a to begin with...
js chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
you lost me as soon as you wrote "kileena the queen of time, the girlfriend of the sage"
you've got to be kidding me...
Anonymus chapter 24 . 8/12/2013
That was totally awesome!
I love the way you kept Naruto and may as a two people relationship, because a lot of authors who write these kinds of stories ruin them by making them a harem.
God Of Cake chapter 3 . 8/7/2013
HAHA poor poor Kimimaro being called the bone guy
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
This is confusing as hell.
Gamelover41592 chapter 24 . 5/27/2013
that was awesome
Dragon-of-Chaos chapter 18 . 3/16/2013
you use a lot of zelda refrences
Domina Titania chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
Chapter Six
So far I see Avatar the Last Air-bender, for some reason Zelda, and God of War so far...
I LOVE this story!
Domina Titania chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
I literally fan-girled when I read the third option... I fail.
ANYWAY! First Chapter and I'm already hooked, it's not everyday this happens to be so I thank you. JA NE!
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