Reviews for Black as he's painted
Lmb111514 chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
This is amazing so far, can't wait for the next chapter!:)
Narcissa Black chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Dromeda was in Slytherin not RavenClaw. She was with her two sister.
Narcissa Black chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Dromeda was in Slytherin not RavenClaw. She was with her two sister.
River Blue Ink chapter 2 . 6/19/2011
this is really really good, please write more more i love it !

RIVER
caramel729cucumber chapter 2 . 5/28/2010
Good good good, I like the character introduction, but too short! I want more! Couple of story problems here, but good anyway :D
caramel729cucumber chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Your writing is great and I like your ideas, but there are a couple of problems, in that all the Marauders were in Gryffindor, and I don't know if you remember that part in the Deathly Hallows when James Potter and Sirius meet on the train and become friends, then totally shun Snape? But it's good so far, I like.

-Cucumber x (PS I'm Maia, in case you hadn't realised...)

PPS "Slytherin" need a capital "S".
I'S Watcher chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Is this a one shot, or will it develop into a story? Anyway, update if it is a story please.