|Reviews for What You Need|
| linndy98 chapter 22 . 7/25/2013
Sorry for not commenting earlier, but I wanted to read to the end. This is wonderful! You are very good. I couldn't stop reading. I think Richard Castle would be impressed. Keep it up, never give up.
| Twyger chapter 22 . 3/5/2013
Loved this story! So happy that Kate ended up with the guy and his great family! It is exactly what they all need! Thank you for writing and for sharing.
| B.anon chapter 12 . 11/1/2012
LOL - lovely. :)
| B.anon chapter 11 . 11/1/2012
Nice follow up to the "will she or won't she" tell.
| B.anon chapter 10 . 11/1/2012
Loved your Paula, as well as Kate's reaction.
| B.anon chapter 9 . 11/1/2012
Loved their conversation!
As for useful feedback, I'm not a fan of a lot of adverbs in dialog attribution - particularly this one:
"Thanks, Professor Castle," she replied sarcastically, rolling her eyes.
You write very clearly. I didn't need "sarcastically" as a descriptive, as it was clear from both her words and the eye rolling as to how she intended her words. Just a thought.
| B.anon chapter 8 . 11/1/2012
What a shame you don't appear to be writing Castle any longer - this is very enjoyable. Liked her panic.
| B.anon chapter 7 . 11/1/2012
He probably would use a word like "snuggle". Nice chapter.
| B.anon chapter 6 . 11/1/2012
Nice - not overly - overt.
| B.anon chapter 5 . 11/1/2012
| B.anon chapter 4 . 11/1/2012
I'm not sure I believe that Kate would have taken Castle up on the tub offer, but it was an enjoyable chapter all the same.
| B.anon chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
"Good night, you two. Don't do anything I wouldn't do. That leaves you plenty of leeway," Martha teased.
LOL -great line.
| B.anon chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
Again, nicely written. Liked the shoe imagery - I could picture what it feels like to take off a pair of heels.
| B.anon chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
A nice scene. It's refreshing to read an author who doesn't overdo the words - you nicely got across both in a minimal amount of space.
| Tony7323 chapter 6 . 10/15/2012
Pretty good ... But I have read Smutter stuff on here .. But it was good