Reviews for Craving
Nick-Arach chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
So not going to be a two shot?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
if you do a second chapter write that naruto screws a pregnant starfire i'd love to read something like that.
Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
interesting... popcorn...
Batros940 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Very nice. I always enjoy you Naruto and Starfire stories.
Michael chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
LOL! The last part is funny!
Rickjames196 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
ahah the popcorn thing
TheGhostWriter69 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
one word
UMMX chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
Nice story keep it up and I want more...
daniel 29 chapter 2 . 6/19/2010
The Police were currently carting off a group of young punks part of the eight incarnation of some game called the Slicers.

In this sentence try gang instead of game

''My Grebnaks! They need attention.'' She panted out.

Funny name for breasts must be tamerian

''Indeed it was my little Gorftog.

Must also be tamereian for boyfriend fuuny word though
MizoreShirayukiFan chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Okay I'm curious and hungry with that popcorn idea.
Zero Kenzaki chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
xbusterz chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
umm how old is naruto now if (22 maby kinda)

(29 atsestible(get the joke) (30-35 fine
shadow chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
very good how about you make one with naruto and bumblebee or jinx or one of the other female character's of teen titan's keep up the good work