|Reviews for Alone|
| bella's beta chapter 24 . 3/7
What a beautiful
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/18/2012
I'm glad Elisabeth is still there with them. Forgive me for saying so, but I felt like you rushed through the last two chapters & maybe Elisabeth's recovery and moving on after her divorce. I always thought that maybe Edward was afraid to have children. Abusive behavior can be inherited, after all, if the parents don't make a concerted effort to be good parents. My uncle was abused as a child. He grew up with a temper and abused his kids. My cousin was so afraid that he signed his two children over to be adopted by their step-father. My husband & I were very aware of the potenial (my mom has a terrible temper). I worked very hard to always keep my anger from hurting anyone else (especially my kids).
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
It is terrible that Jasper (and possibly Alice) chose to get drunk and then drive, but I think that Edward's temper probably left him with no more ability to reason than the drunken Jasper. Perhaps Edward will see the light as well as Bella. If Bella could curb her emotions, it would be better. It does take two to fight. At least they would not have these "knock-down-drag-out fights."
| twihardward chapter 24 . 12/12/2011
| BelieverALEX chapter 24 . 5/14/2011
Uh I think am gonna cry! Great story!
| BelieverALEX chapter 23 . 5/14/2011
| BelieverALEX chapter 14 . 5/14/2011
| BelieverALEX chapter 7 . 5/13/2011
Love this chapter!
| Natsar chapter 11 . 3/9/2011
OMG! How stupid can Bella get?
| NOTINUSE1345549387 chapter 9 . 1/26/2011
i know you said not to panic about Jacob, but ehh, i can't help. lol really good story though!
| NOTINUSE1345549387 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
oh no, i'm going to cry lol
| twilightobsessed40873a chapter 24 . 12/3/2010
That was great. I love happy endings
| xxxEdward's girliexxx chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
| team-jacob-4-ever126 chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
| ickaren chapter 24 . 7/21/2010
Thank you Mellie. I enjoyed your story. I am glad that they are enjoying being parents and I hope you and Jensen continue to enjoy your child, too.