Reviews for How It Ends
bluejellyfishOuO chapter 8 . 8/14/2013
Wow... That was simply amazing. I honestly don't know what to say. I rarely run into these type of fanfictions, the well written ones that aren't cliché and melodramatic. There are a few punctuation and grammatical errors, but overall, it was great.
ScarletBlackberry chapter 8 . 6/21/2013
Shame that I did not find this story any sooner.

I don't think I can say more than what your reviewers have said; this story was beautifully written and well thought out. Sebastian was very in-character, and the way you depicted older Ciel is realistic and in-character as well.

I commend you greatly for this; the ending was incredible and left me wanting more. However, I don't think having additional content to this story would make it more enjoyable since this story's ending was perfect and mysterious.

I would have loved to read more Kuroshitsuji stories from you. You kept me at the edge of my seat throughout the entire tale.
Sulix chapter 8 . 3/25/2012
Bittersweet, beautifully, heart-wrenchingly bittersweet.

Normally I hate tragedies or overly-emotional stories because they usually are more melodrama than anything, but you managed to make me cry, laugh, hurt, hope, love, miss and everything in between in the span of 8 chapters.

I love it when I find this jewels among all the stories.

This is going to my favs, to my LJ, to my personal archive(not on-line and I don't share without asking first)and you to my fav authors.

Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Sulix
CherryFlavouredPoison chapter 8 . 9/25/2011
...so sad...I am crying...
ClockworkCoeur chapter 8 . 8/15/2011
This fanfiction is... Hard to describe with the all the words that I know for complimenting something. But I shall try my hardest!

I've said before that your writing style is elegant... But it's not just your style anymore, the whole fanfiction was overflowing with a thoughtful, careful grace that is hard to put into words.

I could see this as an alternate ending for Kuroshitsuji, in fact, it seems to seamlessly fit in with the rest of the story. Like a missing piece of the puzzle. I think I'll have a hard time differentiating the two!

Not only did you present the story with an imperceptible huge amount of elegance but you describe London perfectly as well! The weather is still somewhat like that now, and I could really see all the alleyways and the graveyard.

Halfway through reading this last chapter I google Abney Park cemetery -because I've never been there myself- and found that you described it so beautifully and perfectly. Looking at the pictures gave me less of a sense of the graveyard than your writing did!

I've laughed, and I've cried, and despite how cliché that sounds it really is true!

I'm so glad that you wrote, and that I found so a wonderful fanfiction!

Chir x
ClockworkCoeur chapter 3 . 8/14/2011
"Somehow, in the middle of a city that never let anyone get away"

You sure you've never been to London? You've got it pinned!

It's exactly like that! XD

Omg, I love this fanfic sooo much!1 33333

xxx
ClockworkCoeur chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Aaah! This is sooo good!

And I'm in a really Autumny/Wintery mood now because of it, despite the fact it's really hot out.

Your writing style is... For want of another word; elegant. Very graceful and sober!

I can't wait to read more!

xxx
endless-october chapter 8 . 4/24/2011
This is definitely the best Kuroshitsuji fanfic and one of the best fics I've ever read.

Write more, please! The world needs it)
HoPeLeSsRoMaNtIc-29 chapter 8 . 4/21/2011
Wow! I'm speechless. It was so beautifully written...

I absolutely LOVED your story! It was brilliant! There are really no words to express how much I loved it... all that emotion you brought out in me with the way you wrote the fic, it was absolutely gorgeous! Well done!

I cannot wait to read more by you.

Keep up the awesome work.

Love, Niki

p.s. Though I didn't quite understand the ending. What exactly did Sebastian do? I mean, what did he sacrifice for Ciel and where did he go? I read the scene a few times, but I still can't seem to understand it. :S
wonky chapter 8 . 4/15/2011
This story just made me start to cry. It is probably the most believable ending I've ever read to Ciel and Sebastian's story. Thank you so much for sharing this - I really enjoyed it.
roecla chapter 8 . 1/21/2011
Ok I can not decide whether this is better or worse than Sebby actually eating his soul.

Huh. I cried more than during the actual ending of Season 1 O.O

Wonderful story. Absolutely refreshingly different and breath taking. Heart breaking and filled with bittersweetness and all the pride and mind games that keep them apart.

*goes to the drooling corner*
thaurer chapter 8 . 1/17/2011
I loved loved loved this story! I really enjoyed your writing style, and basically everything about this story except the ending. Of course, you're the author ;) so you can do what you want, and I won't criticize that, but it hurts my soul! I hate it when things end with just having people split up. That's one of the worst things ever! But it certainly made for a dramatic ending. Thanks so much for the read!
NinjaSheik chapter 8 . 1/7/2011
LOVED IT!
bondageluvr chapter 8 . 10/3/2010
how do you write like this? i swear i haven't cried since 2007. curse you for being so talented )
nejisoifon-lover91 chapter 8 . 8/14/2010
If i told you i cried at the end of this would you laugh? Cause i did and still am. This iss really sad. I loved it all the same, just really sad. Fantastic fic.
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