|Reviews for Ambivalence|
| Shanibani6 chapter 53 . 7/21/2011
First off, I'd just like to say I did not read the entire chapter, nor will I intend to read the end of this story...
I had read all the way up to Chapter 53 thinking the story was incredibly well written... up until Bella just "forgave" her mother for the death of her son...
I have not looked at your profile, so I have no idea whether or not you've ever had children, but it seems you do not understand the concept of a mother's love.
I can understand Renee's POV, of not wanting Bella to get pregnant in the first place at such a young age, but if Bella and Edward were so passionate about their son, then I don't believe anyone could just openly welcome the catalyst that helped induce that miscarriage, right back into their arms.
I love my mother dearly, and when I had my son (out of wedlock as well,) she was not happy that we were young (22 and 23) but she took it all in stride and loves her grandson very much.
If I had a mother like Renee, and she caused me to lose my son, whether I've known that i was pregnant for 1 minute, 1 day, 1 week, or 1 month, I would not hesitate to never speak to her again (nor allow her any sort of relationship to my future children, husband or myself.)
Watching the agony Edward and Bella went through over the fact that they'd lost their baby, and then to have Bella just apologize because Renee's reasoning was because Bella was being curt over a phone, and then have Edward just hugging her and sawing it's okay, just falls under the truly unpredictable.
So at this time, I end my review, and hope that even though this story is completed, you'll take into consideration, that if you want Bella to be consistent, whether she has a forgiving nature or not, maternal instincts overrule almost all... especially with Bella losing her child in such a horrible way.
| SDenie chapter 57 . 6/21/2011
I'm glad I found your story and furthermore its completed :)
I tried not to read stories that yet to be complete. It get me annoyed sometime. Which is not fair to the writer, I think :).
Anyhoo.. like you story very much. Now I'm reading your other story :).
Thanks for sharing your work :) Take care.
| Margret1221 chapter 57 . 5/18/2011
Well Done! :)
| Margret1221 chapter 40 . 5/14/2011
:) Great Job!
| RoseWolf13 chapter 57 . 4/23/2011
Omg I love this story it is seriously one of my favorite stories I have ever read
| LinaLinda chapter 57 . 4/6/2011
Honestly, this is the best story I have read on fanfic. I love how you incorperated the original but completely made it your own! I wish that they wouldve had a baby girl, just to see how edward would react lol
Love this story and is most definitely passing it on :)
| shivXxx chapter 57 . 2/27/2011
WOW! I just read this story from chapter one right up to the second part of the epilogue in one day-only stopping only for bathroom breaks! This story was truly amazing and not only was it one of the most interesting stories I have read on Fanfiction, but it was the one I enjoyed the most.
I cried when Bella cried and laughed when she laughed! You told this story perfectly, and always left me wanting more!
This story basically told the story of me and my best friend! I plucked up the courage to tell him how I felt one day and the rest is history!
I have had an idea for a story in my head now for a while and this story has made me want to write it even more!
Can't wait to read some more of your stories! Keep writing the way you are and you will definitely go far!
This story was a joy to read and I enjoyed every single minute of it!
Thank you so much! :)
| Leigh Warner chapter 57 . 2/15/2011
I have happy tears running down my face. You ended the story perfectly. Im kind of curious to what happens in Alice and Emmetts lives but you did a wonderful job with this story and it was an absolute pleasure reading it
| x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 57 . 2/3/2011
thanks for a great story :)
| inactiveuser103939101303129 chapter 57 . 1/29/2011
i've read every chapter. keep it up, girl! :)
| Everlasting Midnight chapter 57 . 1/25/2011
this book is absolutely amazing, i love it soooo much
it's been great reading ]
| bella-cullen1989 chapter 57 . 1/25/2011
aw so cute :)
| FOREVERxoAxoCULLEN chapter 18 . 1/25/2011
YESYESYES! ITS ABOUT TIME! bella and edward are perfect for each other but i expect bella and jacob or something soon but i would still love bella and edward they are always my fav couple!
| vampiregurl chapter 57 . 1/25/2011
i've always thought love is friendship. combining these two elements make a happy contented relationship in my opinion. i wish i have edward and bella's love one day.
| msfleabite chapter 57 . 1/25/2011
love this story and like many others i am very sad to see it go! :( . . . i cant wait to read more of your storys!