Reviews for On a Clear Day
HummingbirdsWildHeart chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
I love this. You can't fathom how immensely I love this. It cracks me up and it makes me smile. And it makes me insanely jealous of Harry's ability to talk to Cupboards. Draco’s too. Granted not that I can't talk to cupboards... okay I am more jealous that my cupboards don't talk back. The cat I have. The Draco, Harry and Cupboard I am without. Oh woe is me. I am rambling which indicates I am in fucking love with this.


P.S. Thank you, you made my month.
dorothy chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
great story, i love the way you build up draco and harry's relationship, while still keeping them in believable character and maintaining their snark factor. thanks!
PetrichorMist chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
This was an excellent read! I loved the bits with Draco sitting and singing on the stairs. And you just wrote Harry's exasperation and feelings for his situation so well. I'm also pleased with this being in Draco's POV! I've been aching for a Draco's POV of Reparations but I doubt it'll ever happen... Anyway, thank you very much for all the lovely fic you share with us!
personandthing chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
haha! you've got the cupboard from Reparations/Foundations in here! Awesome!
robin maxwell chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
i really enjoyed this story. i think my favorite part was when draco was singing outside harry's door. it was hilarious.
Jess-siriusly chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
wowwww this is longgg, i felt like i just ran a marathon :D but it's so satisfying seeing them finally together, and their moments in this story are too cute.. :D
4Lj2x93s chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read, fanfiction or otherwise. I have no words for the depth at which this story touched me. You have truly incredible talent. I'd write more, but I'm off to read everything else you've ever posted now.
roon0 chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
I just wanted to say I so thoroughly enjoyed this. I am not usually into slash but this was so sweet and tender, I loved it and have already recommended it to friends.
dress up romance xx chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Oh my god, this story is awesome! I read it all the way through and I absolutely loved it! You have an amazing writing style and you captured Harry and Draco perfectly.
WOWZAcoolBEANS chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I thought that this was seriously great, in-character and fun. Thanks for writing! :D
createadisaster chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
this was spectacular and i loved it. the characters were so perfectly real, and their banter was entirely them. i loved this.
Renleek chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Goodness me, what a lovely fic! There's so many things I love about it, I don't really know how to word it eloquently enough for me to get my point across. It started out light but it got so much deeper and I felt Draco was so IC. I love how you write and how you made these separations and development through metaphor and just really really brilliant. There, I can't be articulate about this. Just that I loved it.

Loved the progression of the "relationship" but I love them and how they come together. How Draco's this person who's still in-progress and so is Harry. Love the banter, the subtle flirting that they don't even realize they're doing. Loved that Draco barged in on Harry's life and for once was determined even though he knows it's stupid. I really can go on and on but it still won't express how much I loved this.

And I must say, that Smiths tune was a sexy addition. Despite my past immaturities, I'm no longer one to like having my HP characters sing random known songs but this, my god, this was perfect. I could almost see a Morrisseyfied Draco and all manners of cool. It's like Morrissey's sarcasm and snark fit Draco so well!
LittlePlumTree chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Wow. That was actually amazing. I stayed up till 2 in the morning just so I could finish reading. Truly brilliant, I love how you captured the personalities so perfectly, and yeah, just wow. I feel like im rambling coz its 2 in the morning, so ill stop now haha :) in two words, loved it. :D
ImaginationOnPaper chapter 1 . 10/18/2011

Oh my.

My dear girl, you genius, GENIUS girl, I can't even think of where to begin.

I guess I want to start off saying I'm a Dramione type of gal. I will ship them until the end, I read Dramione, I draw Dramione, I live Dramione. I kind of tend to cringe away from Drarry, although I'm not trying to hate on anyone preferences.

So one day, someone recommends this one shot, and I'm thinking to myself ' Okay, I'm bored, It's only a one shot, I'll read it."

And let me tell you, I am SO glad I did.

There wasn't one part that I found awkward or weird. I was actually rooting in my head for Draco to kiss Harry at multiple parts!

I find, when reading Dramione, that people tend to make Hermione utterly flawless and so unlike herself, and make Draco act like a douche and all of a sudden he thinks she's hot and they fuck.

And I'm like 'Ehh... Okaaay..'

But this story, this beautiful amazing story you wrote, it feels like it's canon. It was so realistic, and I love the way you took things slow and let their relationship progress.

Although I'm not a prude, I don't always want to read a giant lemon fic, I actually want there to be SUBSTANCE in the story.

The blowjob at the end, I think, was entirely appropriate, and was written so that I didn't cringe away at the bluntness of it, but I found myself a little heated by the end of it. In the best way possible.

So above all, I want to thank you for this beautiful story, And I will be favoriting it.

You have a gift.

Consider writing books as a profession!

ShantiSmurf chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
This is at least the third time I've read this amazing fic and somehow wtf I haven't reviewed? Shame on me! Few authors have such a vivid talent for reaching into my gut and my heart and leaving me all twisted up in the best way possible; laughing and cringing and aching and sighing...No one does flangst quite like you and it is so so my very favorite thing to read! Thank you for the endless enjoyment!
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