Reviews for The Motion in the Ocean
lemonbutt chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
LMFAO! for real! all i;v'e ever read was that Edward had such a HUGE DICK. hahahaa. this really made my night. ahahaa. too funny!
GiveUsAKiss413 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
LMAO amazing. Loved it!
FreaKiki chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I am so glad that your leading guy is Edward! I noticed its usually jasper and i would have cried if you did this to him!
FreaKiki chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I am so glad that your leading guy is Edward! I noticed its usually jasper and i would have cried if you did this to him!
Gemgem020507 chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
BWAHAHAHAHAHA Oh this is sooo being sent to the wife. Damn team Edward do not know what they are missing out on *thinks about The Major and his huge peepee*
froggyqueen chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
loved it! You are one funny lady! It was kinda sad too though. I had to bow my head and have a moment of silence for the teenie weenie. ;)
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
poor Edward and Bella
Mr. Shy Rockstar chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Im sad. Because I couldn't even imagine something that small. is that even possible? Oh God XD

Rofl

Im speecheless

D:
SharlynRose chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
LOL and LOL some more! That was funny :) I've never read a story about Edward with teenie weenie before, and it was still really hot though, good job x
ktdid23 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I laughed so hard reading this! "It's like sucking on a coffee straw" Brilliant! I love how Edward was so enthusiastic. Hehe

This was hillarious! Where do you come up with this stuff? GAH I love all your stories! They're all so funny! Wow I about pissed myself reading this hahah :P
keyecullen chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Awwww...that is just so sad! Suggesting a strap on? That is freakin hilarious!

Keye
Edwardsbloodtype chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
I didn't know whether to laugh or cry. Okay I laughed. Pooor Edward. He was so enthusiastic !
Jasper'sPixie92 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
wow not how i pictured Edward but it was hilatious. couldn't stop laughing
LDUT chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
I LOVED THIS! I laughed my ass off! Even more so because I happened to be giving my 2yr old son a bath while reading and when I got to the toddler weenie mention I glanced at my son and the giggles started. Oh wow. Poor Edward!
reesessweetie chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
this one shot is HILARIOUS! her poor, beautiful man... we're soo used to seeing hot guys with large peens but now, we're seeing one with a small one... it totally caught me off guard. but just soo dam hilarious! they just need to be really creative with vibrators.. hahaha
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