Reviews for Steam
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2024
Me commenting 15 years later
That's such a cute and soft thing
Thank you for this little but great jily fic
reader chapter 1 . 7/21/2023
what a nice scene, I could feel their nerves, thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2022
You've gone too near to "that" part of my 14 year old teenage mind *laughs* like things were getting so intimate and I was definitely expecting a snog session :/ but nvm this already excited my brain.

beautifully written
Fayejase chapter 1 . 3/7/2022
Right in the middle of just friends and more than that is exactly right.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2020
shit how the fuck did they not have sex
EmeraldFlower24 chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
*sigh*
Still in my dreamland. Fanfics like these make my day thousand times better. You're a wonderful writer Mina! I absolutely love the way you express such simple moments so beautifully that I end up smiling for a long time even after I've finished reading it.
Please come back and start writing again. :)
ThatCrazyFangirl7 chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
So beautiful and sweet!
lostinastory33 chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Absolutely beautiful. It was sweet and delicate and so full of emotion, despite it's simplicity. I loved it.
FlameFeather4549 chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Aww, this was really sweet! Well done, I really enjoyed this!
caspasta chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
this was so cute. i wanted them to kiss but the ending was adorable :3
caribbeanblues chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Awwwww. So cute!
danimaltauro chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
It's pretty unusual not ending with a kiss, but it's really cute.
And I like the way they were becoming friends gradually
Kathleen Kelly chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Awwwww. I would love me some James and Lily Prefects bathroom smut, but this is even more beautiful. I do love sweet James and Lily much more.
thegirlwhoflies chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Awwwwwww! I love it!
elizaka chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
So adorable!
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