Reviews for Steam |
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![]() ![]() Me commenting 15 years later That's such a cute and soft thing Thank you for this little but great jily fic |
![]() ![]() what a nice scene, I could feel their nerves, thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() You've gone too near to "that" part of my 14 year old teenage mind *laughs* like things were getting so intimate and I was definitely expecting a snog session :/ but nvm this already excited my brain. beautifully written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right in the middle of just friends and more than that is exactly right. |
![]() ![]() shit how the fuck did they not have sex |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* Still in my dreamland. Fanfics like these make my day thousand times better. You're a wonderful writer Mina! I absolutely love the way you express such simple moments so beautifully that I end up smiling for a long time even after I've finished reading it. Please come back and start writing again. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So beautiful and sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful. It was sweet and delicate and so full of emotion, despite it's simplicity. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this was really sweet! Well done, I really enjoyed this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was so cute. i wanted them to kiss but the ending was adorable :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww. So cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's pretty unusual not ending with a kiss, but it's really cute. And I like the way they were becoming friends gradually |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww. I would love me some James and Lily Prefects bathroom smut, but this is even more beautiful. I do love sweet James and Lily much more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwww! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So adorable! |