Reviews for Reciprocity
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 2/8
Again, beautiful. More than a team, a family. More than friendship, a species of love. Thank you for writing this.
drj13 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I loved this and "An Exchange" back when I first read them. But I recently watched 3x7 Red Hot again. After Jane pulled the stolen toupee ***out of the couch***, I just had to say, "Ha! It's not just fanon, it's canon - Jane hides things in the couch!
RD chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
*dies* I love this team friendship-love thing you have going. It's so sweet! Please write more! It's really hard to find Mentalist fics that have good team friendship (lol or this brand of team love) in. Loving it!
IceCreamDoodle13 chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Beautiful.

For some reason, I adore this sentence: 'He basks in their happiness like a cat in the sun.' Something about it is just so Jane.

I'm kind of stunned, I can't really find the words. There's something so sad and strange about this, but it reads very peacefully. This story made me feel things I don't quite understand, so thank you for the skilful storytelling.
aku no tensai chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Wow~ I REALLY loved this story It doesn't say that it's completed but I was just wondering if it really was or wasn't. Normally, with a story this good, I'd ask for you to continue but then...some people don't want to or don't have an idea of what to do for the next chapter if they do and then, there are some who do but it just doesn't turn out right.

In other words, I'm hoping that you make another chapter buut~ it would also be good if you stopped here as well :)
FallenPie chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~ your two fics were so freaking adorable! And so sweet, Jane is slowly getting a family back :)
Jinxauthor Mel chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Wow, this sequel is even more potent, and I love the way you incorporated and developed all the symbolism from the first story. _ (Also, my question has been answered. :P)
mirrohayou chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
This is sad and beautiful and wonderful all at once, amazing work.
Ebony10 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
"Grace asked, looking Jane over and contemplating how difficult it would be to find a toddler leash that could fit him."

lol, seriously.

This was a great story. Kind of sad and tragic, yet comforting at the same time. Lovely work. Well done!

Also loved this part:

"He giggled in glee and used it in interrogation until Lisbon made him stop."
lisbon69 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
oh my... what a wonderful little chaptr. a little confusing by it's meaning in a way, kind of sweet but strange but i realy liked it
Iloveplotbunnies chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
:) A stuffed penguin makes everything better... I just had to say that!

This is a wonderfully written story on each of the team, and I enjoyed reading all the moments with each of them! :D
The Torrid Pen chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
AW! I love this. Healing and solace (and a Jane/Cho moment!) This story was wonderful. Lots of symbolism, you must have worked very hard. Beautiful story.
JRRS chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
A really nice story. I enjoyed reading it.