Reviews for Game Over
PolarBluePaw chapter 16 . 8/28/2012
It was good! In this last chapter you could have included a little more romance between Ittosai and May...but it's pretty good as it is...good luck with your other writing and if you have some extra time check out my story on ...here's the link : s/3050465/1/Between_worlds
I would be eternally grateful if you read it and tell me what you think about it (through a review). Cheers!
PolarBluePaw chapter 15 . 8/28/2012
hmm...it was actually a good ending...him being a real boy and all :) And it sounded genuine
PolarBluePaw chapter 14 . 8/28/2012
:)) You're in the story...that's interesting:)
PolarBluePaw chapter 13 . 8/28/2012
I hope Ittosai's declarations will be original...I mean since I played the game and all...I wan to be surprised...
PolarBluePaw chapter 12 . 8/28/2012
Keep up the good work!
PolarBluePaw chapter 11 . 8/28/2012
yay!Ittosai the hero:))
PolarBluePaw chapter 9 . 8/28/2012
Poor Bo! :))) I liked him best of the game though I must admit his ending was not so romantic as I would have expected. I likes Yo's ending ebst because itw as soo sweet!And to think that initially I never even considered Yo an option...it would be great if you do a fanfic on Yo too, you have talent
PolarBluePaw chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
yay...can't wait to see what happens
PolarBluePaw chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Hilarious chapter:)))) laughed loads...
PolarBluePaw chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
the hot spring scene was soo cute. Also, I never believed Bo was a pervert..in the game I was sure he chimed in with the rest of the guys because of the fun, I might reconsider...Bo might actually be a pervert
PolarBluePaw chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
It ws a pretty good chapter! waiting for the romance...I think Sayori falls for Jin right?
PolarBluePaw chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Going great! like the story soo much so far!
PolarBluePaw chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
I like it! I do hope she chooses Yo though I understand you have a crush for Ittosai..damn! Love Yo!
PostiveCharm416 chapter 16 . 6/15/2012
i like the fanfic very much!
AesEa chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
I'm guessing that ittosai was just watching at the sidelines in this chapter without a care of what might happen to may..except to maybe find an opportunity to shed blood.
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