Reviews for The Jedi He Could, Should Be
Elenothar chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Beautifully angsty! This is really amazing and well-written.

I guess it would be Obi-Wan's greatest dream, to see Anakin so happy and content in his role of a Jedi Knight (*sigh* If it only were that way...)
Jedi Sapphire chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Great fic, as always... I don't think I can tell you often enough just *how* much I like your Anakin and Obi-Wan angst.
WynCatastrophe chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Great story. I loved the intercutting of the bracketed parts, how they paralleled the rest of the narrative, and I especially enjoyed the fragmented nature of it; I really felt like I was in Obi-Wan's head, seeing good things but in a strange way. Really, really enjoyable. I'm not familiar with the body of your work (I will be soon!), but I was wondering ... how would it play out to use this style for Anakin, looking back on their relationship just after Mustafar? Just a thought ...
Tovah98 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Oh, wow! So lovely and sad. You are very talented. :D