|Reviews for Cornered|
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
I think this story fit well for the fifth season. I believe the brothers are doing better especially now that Ruby is dead and the trust that once was there will be again. Also, glad this wasn't set in the third season as they are so depressing, Sam fails, Dean dies.
I kept wondering what was going on with Dean and Sam. I couldn't figure out why Sam didn't remember anything and he couldn't keep Dean from getting shot. Nice job with the mystery. I've wondered if those hunters would show up again or if they talked to anyone about Sam.
I'm glad that Sam came to the rescue when he did, I was getting angry at Dean's captives because they kept shooting him even if it was just a tranquilizer.
Loved the rescue and enjoyed the ending with the brothers talking in the hospital room.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
| SingleMinded chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
I love this. Love and miss reading some hurtDean with just hurtDean in a one shot. Thanks for sharing.
| JackFan2 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
That was a superbly done job!
Had me going from the start. Didn't know it wasn't Sam in the cell with him. Didn't know it wasn't Lucifer. Didn't know the walls were really closing in. So many great twists and surprises to keep me guessing all along the way.
Loved Sam and Cas having their little 'geek-fest' there at the end, and how Dean reflects on this being the little brother he always knew and loved. Loved how you tied this all back in to the boys time with Ruby, Sam's being misled by her and how it culminated to their separation, however brief, being largely painful for them both.
I'm with you. I think that so long as the boys stay together, this season will end successfully and their relationship will be better in the end, stronger even.
Thanks for bringing this fic. My alert didn't come through. I only found this for a friend of min rec'ing it to me.
| PennyFireFly chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Dean isn't the only one that misses that Sam. I think you captured the Sam before demon blood realy well here. And I have to say that I am all for a sense of hope for my two fav men! Read it- Loved it - Favorited it! :)Penny
| Von chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Yay! I knew Sam wasn't real from when he said "You got jumped, man"!
I didn't know if he was a ghost or a hallucination though.. not until he said he didn't remember anything from any time Dean blacked out.
I admire your twisty brain for these types of plots! A lot of fun!
| moira4eku chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
I agree with you as well. It will take time, but the brother's will gain what they have lost in each other. I had a feeling that Dean was hallucinating Sam, but his hallucination actual kept him sane and focused. Love the story! Thanks for sharing!
| racefh853629 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
I really like this story!
Poor Dean, being tortured by these guys. You wrote the story so well that I never would've guessed how it ended!
Fantastic job! :D
| Darkyu chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Great story! You stayed in character at all times, the story was awesome and well writen story without counting the fact that the ending was perfectly unexpected. What else can I ask from a story?
Thank you a lot, this one obviously goes to my favorites!
| nexus432 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Please write more soon.
| S chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Amazing!I never saw that end coming,I'm shocked.I love the way you wrote Dean's point of view at the end,and the hope he finds to finally fix things with Sam. I hope we get to see something like this on the show,it'd be awesome! Absolutely love this story,please write more soon!
| LoupGarouAngel chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Great little piece here! I loved the twist you added at the end, and the brotherly love&angst, keep up the good work!
| maxine chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
This was an awesome story-one of the best I have read!
| apieceofcake chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Enjoyed muchly, thank you :-)
| Disneymagic chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
WOW! Seriously good and I'm so glad for the hope you offer in this story. I really want to believe that things can be fixed between the two brothers.
I thought you did a great job with the confusion between what was actually happening and what was hallucination. Nice back story to explain the whump as well.
Thanks for the great story!
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
This story was completely and utterly, 100% FANTASTIC! Bravo, my dear. I'm thrilled with the brotherly love you infused throughout. And it did indeed kindle some hope. Thank you so much for sharing this one.