Reviews for A Pretty Still Doll
CrystalLover chapter 5 . 12/18/2013
Freedom. Big word. :)
CrystalLover chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
kaorishinju chapter 15 . 8/6/2013
This was beautifully written. The time skip( s) were a tad confusing, though. I hope you do become a professional writer ! I'd love to read more !
I like RAINBOWS and UNICORNS chapter 16 . 7/21/2013
Amazing story! I really liked it! I'm not exactly sure if the French is right, but I could possibly be. (I'm in my second year of learning French so it could be something I don't know yet.) I really liked it with all the mixment of things (Old style with things from now) and it was really good! I shall read more things by you now. ( that will most likely be awesome!)
Lady Rosari van Alysteine chapter 16 . 5/10/2013
I love it! Simply amazing :-)
The11thD0ct0r chapter 7 . 4/27/2013
AAAAAAHHHHHH! sakura chan is sick... does she have like yellow fever or something? I hope not...
Snowstarz92 chapter 16 . 2/9/2013
Awesome story and an awesome ending.
FoamBanana chapter 16 . 12/17/2012
I thought that the story was fairly good. It had a nice standard to it, however I would like to point out that you could have given the rebels some spotlight too. Given them a point in the story. It would make the story a little longer, and if possible, better. I also noticed that you did not write three years later above one of the previous chapters. I would love for you to just add that in order for people to not get confused. It's just a point of clarification. Otherwise the storyline was one of the best I've seen in my three years writing here on fanfiction . net. I hope that you take in my criticism, but also that I though that the story was really good. Keep on writing! / Foambanana
Mona chapter 3 . 10/18/2012
Have just started to read it and it awesome.
Lilac Queen chapter 16 . 5/2/2012
I love this story! It's awesome!
hikari chan chapter 16 . 11/8/2011
whoaa! Such AMAZING STORY!

I love all the plots, though there's an ooc that youve explained. XDD

I'm kinda suprised when found itachi and naruto were together! 3

Keep your AMAZING WORKS! I'll support you! XDD
Dark Blossom22 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Absolutely loved this story! :D :D
another.creative.lover chapter 10 . 9/10/2011
ANNNNND PLOT TWIST! :D Love those plot twists, dear. (gets flustered) ONLY SIX MORE CHAPTERS TO GO!

:DDDDD Sasuke proposed! (laughs) And Mikoto and Ita made a bet. (makes kitty face) OMIGOD OMIGOD OMIGOD, EVEN PAPA UCHIHA'S FLUFFY! Fugaku, you cutie pie. XD
another.creative.lover chapter 9 . 9/10/2011

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH SASUKE, YOU'RE SO AWESOME! He is seriously the most becoming Sasuke I've ever read. x_x

One thing about this though, that I've forgotten to mention...

It's about your author's notes. I've noticed that you like to mention them in the middle of your stories, and I'll admit, I do that too, sometimes. x_x Force of habit.

It's actually not very good. Author's notes that are in the middle of the story tend to disrupt the flow of the chapter, and it makes the reader lose track of their place in the story. Total confusion. O_O

So, yeah. :D If you want author's notes, just put them at the end. XD

I loved this chapter. :3

SEXY TIME? :D (gets punched in the gut)
another.creative.lover chapter 8 . 9/10/2011
"She did not and openly accepted you in her limited world and started to depend on you. With you, her world began to open up in small fragments, the barriers breaking away with every step she took by your side."

This is definitely not Cinderella. x_x That was all mushy gushy princess crap.

THIS is real schtuff. ;)

And, I'm ecstatic to say, that this is the first fanfic that I've read where Sasuke opens up Sakura's world. And not Sasuke's. :) Inspirational. Seriously.
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