Reviews for Rival Love
PyroTy100 chapter 13 . 10/17/2011
A very interesting story...and a very good story as well. Strong plot, good details, not bad, unlike most PJO fics.

In other words, awesome job, and i shall expect more in future chapters.

Guest chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
IAMSHERLOCKED1234 chapter 13 . 9/21/2011
i really like this
The Sarcastic Kid chapter 13 . 8/22/2011
Love it! (:
LemonHead54 chapter 13 . 8/17/2011
Love it! Please update!
Myself chapter 13 . 8/5/2011
this is really good and I especially like how it's original I hate over-used ideas do Percy and Annabeth get caught? If they do and are talking to the principal it would be funny when Percy's explaining he'd say it was his fault and Annabeth caught him so then the principal asks why Annabeth was gone too Percy's like I shoved her in the cab duh like it's pathetically obvious love the story
FaZe-Life chapter 13 . 8/4/2011
Good book but hopefully it doesn't take you a year to finish. Update soon!
Wisegirl063 chapter 13 . 7/21/2011
This. IS. JUST. AWESME! Man u gotta

Keep working in this story man it could be lik

Ur career or somethin jkjk no bit really keep writing!:DD
juliet92 chapter 13 . 7/20/2011
it was nice me like it i acually think its one of the best i've read about percy ,mom,and annabeth or should i say mom,percy and annabeth? jajaja okay laterz plzz write more the force of fanfiction may be with you ,0_o i don't know where that came from... s... keep writing plzz i love your work jajajaja


percabeth13 chapter 13 . 7/17/2011
update sooonn sooon sooooooon! great and super cute so far!
GreatGal chapter 13 . 7/17/2011
ADHD-Kid2811 chapter 13 . 7/14/2011
As always, this chapter was awesome. And the looooong wait makes it even more awesome! Hehe anyways, I agree with you on that 'Luke' part. Same happens with Rachel. People shouldn't do that. I mean, okay. You can show them as characters with a few negative traits and some good traits too. But no! Most writers here just make them outright evil! That should be stopped.

Enough ranting for now. Good luck with the story! Keep writing...
SeaOfWisdom18 chapter 13 . 7/13/2011
Awwwwww so cute! Please update soon please! And considering I never beg (authors I have favorites: "Excuse me?" I quote, wow! This is awesome! Please please please update soon! I just love how- SHUT UP) hehe. Sorry. I swear, sometimes I think I have ADHD. But no dyslexia. I love reading. Maybe I'm a half blood, though! Ooh! I want to be a daughter of Poseidon, but maybe I am a child of Apollo, or a child of Poseidon with the powers of Apollo... Sorry. See what I mean about the ADHD? Anyways, I really like this story! Update soon!
emeraldstarforever chapter 13 . 7/9/2011
update soooooooooooon!i'll be waiting...
Juniper33 chapter 13 . 7/8/2011
I LOOOOVVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! sorry, i forgot i had it on Caps Lock...
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