Reviews for Rival Love
Wisegirl063 chapter 13 . 7/21/2011
This. IS. JUST. AWESME! Man u gotta

Keep working in this story man it could be lik

Ur career or somethin jkjk no bit really keep writing!:DD
juliet92 chapter 13 . 7/20/2011
it was nice me like it i acually think its one of the best i've read about percy ,mom,and annabeth or should i say mom,percy and annabeth? jajaja okay laterz plzz write more the force of fanfiction may be with you ,0_o i don't know where that came from... s... keep writing plzz i love your work jajajaja


percabeth13 chapter 13 . 7/17/2011
update sooonn sooon sooooooon! great and super cute so far!
GreatGal chapter 13 . 7/17/2011
ADHD-Kid2811 chapter 13 . 7/14/2011
As always, this chapter was awesome. And the looooong wait makes it even more awesome! Hehe anyways, I agree with you on that 'Luke' part. Same happens with Rachel. People shouldn't do that. I mean, okay. You can show them as characters with a few negative traits and some good traits too. But no! Most writers here just make them outright evil! That should be stopped.

Enough ranting for now. Good luck with the story! Keep writing...
SeaOfWisdom18 chapter 13 . 7/13/2011
Awwwwww so cute! Please update soon please! And considering I never beg (authors I have favorites: "Excuse me?" I quote, wow! This is awesome! Please please please update soon! I just love how- SHUT UP) hehe. Sorry. I swear, sometimes I think I have ADHD. But no dyslexia. I love reading. Maybe I'm a half blood, though! Ooh! I want to be a daughter of Poseidon, but maybe I am a child of Apollo, or a child of Poseidon with the powers of Apollo... Sorry. See what I mean about the ADHD? Anyways, I really like this story! Update soon!
emeraldstarforever chapter 13 . 7/9/2011
update soooooooooooon!i'll be waiting...
Juniper33 chapter 13 . 7/8/2011
I LOOOOVVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! sorry, i forgot i had it on Caps Lock...
percy jackson chase chapter 13 . 7/7/2011
Love this! Please update soon. ( It's not often that you find a story as good as this! Favorite author.
Niomia chapter 13 . 7/5/2011
I just spent about 2 and a half hours reading your whole story, which I just found today. Anyways I didn't think it would be too good but I was sooooo wrong. Your story is amazing and I am really excited for you to update. It is the summer so I really hope you can update date faster because from the looks of it, it seems you can take a few months to post one chapter, but they are long and always good so I am not complaining. But anyways, I absolutly love your story and can't wait to read on, and I know I am not the only one. You have 393 reviews which is a lot especially for only having 13 chapters but it shows that everyone really loves your story and can't wait for more to come. I wish you the best of luck as you continue, I will probably check everyday to see if you have posted another chapter, that is what I do for every story I am obsessed with. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more from you so Keep on writin!

-Niomia *):o)
unclaimed12 chapter 13 . 7/4/2011
too lazy to log in

Good chapter. Great idea to keep it light instead of over doing everything like a lot of other authors would do, no offense. Good job.
greekgodfantastic chapter 13 . 7/2/2011
i think it is awsome. maybe you should addthat they get caught and gets send to detention, where they can talk about the incedent w/triton
FiveEightFive chapter 13 . 7/1/2011
Loooovvveeeeee it! Hahahahaga! U just gotta love Percy! Update Soooooooooonnn!
wolfienur chapter 13 . 7/1/2011
Haha, I really love your A/Ns for this chapter for some reason. I was just smiling the whole time. xD

So, this chapter was cute; a nice filler. I liked it. But there are a few things that left me...skeptical. Like when Sally said, "He just doesn't want your life to get any more complicated than this." That doesn't really add up because, y'know, uprooting a teenager's life and moving him to the other side of the country to live with people he'd never met is that uncomplicated?

But overall, it's a nice chapter and you better update soon or else General Knowledge and I will...

I'll leave the end of that sentence to your imagination. x)
Stinkyacorn chapter 13 . 7/1/2011
YAY! YOU UPDATED! And it was totally worth the wait :) Do it again soon!
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