Reviews for Finding Him
sarahburch3612gmail.com chapter 25 . 12/6/2017
So you've received tons of great reviews, now here comes a hardass. This story if not for its personality portrayals I wouldn't even managed to skim it as I did. The highschool teenager aspect of the plot was so dramatized it was unrealistic and at times extremely cringeworthy. A story about sexuality became more about an identity crisis in which both the main characters just couldn't accept and get past hiding something about them. At times this story was monotonus, predictable, dramatic, and exaggerated charactertics. Much of the plot isn't even plausible even if being a fanfiction. It would be helpful if you focused on character development that isn't a streamline Mary-sue of hate to love relationship./ Also even the charactaterization which I supplemented with praise is lacking in concise movement of true body, rather just being such flat one dimensional characters.
MadHatterMistress chapter 25 . 3/22/2016
This story was amazing and it hit very close to home for me. Loved this and hope to read more of your stories. Xxx
Maddy chapter 5 . 3/11/2016
Dont mind me over here fangirling, flapping my arms around and making VERy un attractive noises..
Mello-drame chapter 25 . 7/8/2014
"Rapidash I choose you!" was definitely the best sentence of this story. I'm still laughing. XD
The last chapter was my favorite. :)
fatkitty123 chapter 25 . 11/28/2013
This is the best MattxMello fanfiction. I read this a long time ago but I always re-read it and I guess I felt the need to comment this time. I love the plot, and I especially love the plots when they go to regular school instead of Wammys. I really wish there would be more stories like this, and I would be really happy if you make more MattxMello one-shots or multi-chapter stories. :3 (I also really like your story Savior)
mxmsupporter chapter 25 . 7/25/2013
The last chapter was so EPIC! I think that this fic could be succesfully turned into a movie and the last scene would be thrilling! Not only the last, every scene was great. You manage to write fluff, lemon, angst, fighting scenes... Everything with the same amount of greatness :)
I really liked how this story concerned problems with being tolerant. All these people trying to let you down just because you love sb who is the same gender... Alice was particulary annoying for me ;p I'm an atheist, but I don't go to people and say 'you believe in sth that doesn't exist, stop being stupid!'. I think that everybody should have a right to choose, even if their choices are bad or "disguisting" for others. And anyway, why do homophobes care so much about homosexuality? Are they concerned that it could "outnumber" their "precious, the only one that has a right of being" orientation? Personally I'm straight but I can't understand why it should be the only thing that is right on this planet.
Sorry, I got off the subject of the review :). One of my favourite scenes is the one where Mello bottomed. Not only because I'm a pervert (xD) but because Mello showed Matt that he trusts him completely, even more that when he said that he loved him. I loved this piece :)
I got annoyed by Matt's father's change of mind (why did he go to graduation? I hate it when people defend their opinion so fiercly and then just change it ;p) and the fact that David didn't pay for hurting Mello. But that's just your idea of writing this fic, so I don't mind that much. :)
Thank you for great entertainment for 25 chapters. It was really nice staying with this story :D.
PianoPrincess chapter 25 . 7/15/2013
T_T I can't believe it's over. I've literally been up all night reading this. It's six now and the rising of the sun has brought nothing but heartache about the end. But enough angsting. Are you going to do a sequel? This fic was just to good to end. It was like one of those things that you want to see go on forever. This has definitely earned a favorite from me. :)
Skitch123 chapter 21 . 3/10/2013
HAHAHAHA.
Near is the ukest thin ever XD.
Skitch123 chapter 10 . 3/9/2013
Omg, I thought Matt was going to be the seme xD
Guest chapter 25 . 2/21/2013
Wow. Just wow. I absolutely loved this. The characters, the emotion, the plot and the writing, all of it was just stunning. Best m/m fic i've ever read, thank you so much for uploading this. I literally danced around the house screaming "IT'S SO CUTE!" Pewdiepie style for a full ten minutes after the end. No small wonder you won NaNoWriMo, I'm looking forward to both more fanfics and for the day you become a published author, because the latter is inevitable. - And I don't say that lightly. Ah, the fangirling :D

By the way, homophobes are total twats and way to go for coming to terms with being bi. I have two close friends who are bisexual and another who I have a sneaking suspicion will one day come out of the closet, so it's certainly nothing new over here.

Matt and Mello are so freaking adorable XD

Blessings,
SilentGreenThief x

P.S. I'm reading this on my iPod so it comes up with my email name, not my account. :3
keya-chan chapter 25 . 1/15/2013
I LOVED IT SOO MUCH!
g-peachy-chan chapter 25 . 1/5/2013
I've read it all in one day (my eyes are burning), but it was SO worth it. I like that it has a happy ending. Beautiful, simply beautiful.
I'mTheOmazingOz chapter 25 . 12/28/2012
A sequel would be just amazing, and maybe you could put some more challenges for their relationship in it. Perhaps something akin to jealousy? Hmmm? *waggles eyebrows suggestively*It's just a suggestion, and I know it's not my place to tell you what to write, but if you would create a sequel I would give you an endless amount of virtual desserts. And who doesn't love virtual desserts? So... What do you say? Will you or won't you write a sequel to this touching story?
Jenette chapter 10 . 12/27/2012
Make up sex? Really? *Suggestively wiggles eyebrows8
Jenette chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
Your awesome writing abilities astound me. Please excuse me for bowing in your virtual presence. *bows*
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