Reviews for Howling Wind
Lyrre Zurc chapter 14 . 10/1/2012
Awesome though:) Please do continue this.
midocarrot chapter 14 . 2/18/2012
. waahhhh! I'm so sad that you discontinued it! I hate to see great Hibari fics and then they're discontinued. ): it was really great. I read it even though it was discontinued, and I really wish you would continue this again. This had so much potential.
Anonymous chapter 14 . 6/24/2011
It's actually good, but why do you have to stop I'm very curious about on, how will they find out about Sakura having dreams of Byakuran and will she even find out about future Hibari and her future self? Will she ever to get to meet with the future Irie Shouichi? Will she even meet Byakuran face to face with everyone? Please continue to write more. I like you stories, and I want to know what is going to happen next.
khr lover chapter 2 . 6/2/2011

1)"Oya, Sakura-chan! Good morning!"

not everyone say "oya", and Dino always say"O"!

using -chan to just to Sakura make me kind of weird because Dino always calls other people plainly without -kun,-chan,-san

2)"Anyway, have you seen Hibari?"

Dino calls Hibari Kyoya

3)"Oya, Kyouya-kun!"

Dino uses "O"! not "oya" and calls Hibari plainly Kyoya

why do you even use -kun, when he never used it!

-mad- why do people make these stuff up!

4)"You have a habit for intervening, herbivore."

Hibari will usually not say it way around these things, so he will say like this:

"I won't let you get in the way"

I think, if you translate from this:

"Jama surunante yurusanai yo"

and like I said on the chapter before, don't use herbivore, erase it

5)"Gomenasai, Sakura-chan."

Dino never uses "gomenasai" he uses "sumaneena"

6) "Kyouya-kun is still so stubborn."

Dino calls Hibari plainly Kyoya

why do you even use -kun, when he never used it!

-mad- why do people make these stuff up!

and when was Hibari not stubborn

7)"Why did you come, herbivore?" and "I wanted to get rid of that Cavallone herbivore."

Like I said, don't use too much herbivore, from now on, I will just tell you to just erase what you don't need

8) "You're observant, herbivore." "You read, herbivore?"

erase "herbivore" and what do you mean "read"?

9)a very small smirk on his lips. "A weird herbivore…"

erase "herbivore" and your getting Hibari kind of out of personality

10)"You were too soft, herbivore." and "Fighting is instinct, herbivore.

erase herbivore
khr lover chapter 1 . 6/2/2011

1)You're polite. My student Hibari could learn a thing or two from you."

Dino will not call Hibari as Hibari he always says Kyoya

2)"You must the one that's being reported in the news today"

From when does a junior high students are reported on news for just sports? they only write which school won and the student name will NOT come out

3)"I haven't heard from Reborn-san"

Dino calls Reborn plainly Reborn

4)"Yare, yare, Kyouya-kun."

Dino always call Hibari plainly Kyoya

5)"You disturbed my sleep, herbivore." He said in a monotone voice.

Do not use herbivore that much because in japanese, we do not use herbivore as names,

Kyoya usually just use "herbivore" to "described" people like to Tsuna

example: "I don't care about 'that' herbivore."

so just erease herbivore from this sentence, the other sentence use was okay
kirika o7 chapter 14 . 6/2/2011
Fellow kababayan...please update it soon~! :3
Conanfan15 chapter 14 . 4/29/2011
Please do update!

Its a really great story, and I like the character. It was a nice idea putting in Byakuran, and Hibari is not OOC too! :D

Please continue~


This goes in my favorites as well!
KizunaCho chapter 14 . 3/23/2011
I really like your story!

Cant wait for the next chAPTER!
ConsultingCriminals chapter 14 . 2/6/2011
your story is awesome. I'm so hooked on it, i can't wait to find out what happens next

Your o.c Sakura is epic awesome :D
Oluhasuu chapter 14 . 2/2/2011
I love it! read your story in 3 days xP

love hibari not losing his personality but being nice at the same time

love how sakura is !

like the triangle with byakuran jojojo
NoName chapter 14 . 2/2/2011
OMG i couldnt stop reading this fic, Its so amazing XD ! I'm not really a fan of OC but this OC of yours,Sakura-chan, Me likew im looking forward to read the next Chappie~ please update soon or whenever you have the time to :3 Have a nice day~ Ciao-ciao
Fish and Chipz chapter 14 . 2/1/2011
- You have one more new reader and fan!

This fic is awesome. No, no, no, it didn't suck at all! Lol Hibari pretended to be deaf! That was hilarious! I just started reading your fic a few days ago but my eyes were glued onto the screen so I just went through allllll the chapter in one go. Maybe that's why my eyes are all dry and a bit bloodshot. Eep! Anyway... It's so good... and thank you for supporting my story _

Keep it up!
steel-alchemist chapter 13 . 12/16/2010
New reader here~

:D Your story is very nice~

I'm looking forward to reading more!
TunaSFX chapter 13 . 11/8/2010
This is good fanfic pls continue
misminor chapter 13 . 8/15/2010
wow im in love with this story :D

and is it just me, or does Byakuran have a thing for Sakura? hmm...maybe it's my imagination, but i sure hope he does :D it'd be a real interesting love triangle XD
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