Reviews for Time Passes Too Quickly, Even For Me
PhoenixoftheLostandForgotten chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
Pretty good, considering it's your first time. It was fairly well written, which is a rarity among smutfics. Despite that, I just couldn't help but feel that you looked many of your words up in a thesaurus and used the first synonym that came up. That, in and of itself, is not a bad thing. It can add a certain flavor and variety that many stories lack. The only reason I am pointing it out is because many of the words are used incorrectly. For example, the word "zealous" means "having or showing zeal." Unless semen can show energy and enthusiasm, it would probably be better used to describe a person. Other than that, I have no complaints. You are a good author, and I hope you continue to hone your craft.
FanFicsUnited chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
This is excellent!
Ennah1887 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
For a first time that was awesome.
Motaku1235 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Im hungry now.
XDXDXDXD NICE ENDING! Lol.
Alykusua chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
That
Was
Amazing
Seriously, best Doctor/Master I've ever read.
RandomDraggon chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
pffft hungry master eats a cheezburgr
soggypotatoes chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
HAWT. that was your first lemon? Wow.
Hayley-Saxon-xx chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Nice fic! For your first time this was great! Well done x
TARDIS Time Lord chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Its so good. I absolutely love this.