Masons crush chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
This is so adorable ! She has an amazing imagination !
tynkpynk314 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
aww! that's very good! Tell your cousin she did a very good job for me
ThailynnCullen chapter 1 . 12/16/2011 cute and so sweet!
yunadustrial.twifan chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
i like this. it reminds me of disneys version of princes and the frog were she turns into a frog. how old is youre cousen.
pokemon-hogwarts4eva chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
mermaids can breathe air you in the disney version, but very cute story
MARINA313 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
very cute! super cute! tell ur cuz she needs to write picture books! lol!
kkpeace chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
awww it is just so cute
justawriter33 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
haha, cute.
stuckinadream chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
aww ao cute! love the ending :D "'Ahhh'" she cried. 'look what you have done to me!' then they lived happily ever after." haha so cute!

tell ur cousin that she creates great stories! good job :)
Marshmallowtrees chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
thats adorable! XD
Loverofgoodstories27 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
that was cute, I liked it!
Hufflepuff-DragonRider chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
thats so cute.
A mysterious reviewer chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
This is so cute! Your cousin wrote this? I love it!
Aragalia Mae chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
sha that's so adorable. its cute
SheWhoWrites5213 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Aww, that's so sweet.

I love it: "Ah" she cried. "look what you have done to me!"

then they lived happily ever after.

LOL :)
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