Reviews for A Day at the Beach
4Eva Dreaming chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
XD that was hlarious!
leongabriel2001 chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
O_O I'm confused in who is speaking.
Don'trlyknow chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
that was good and kept me interested and don't worry, it wasn't hard tro read.

spixie303
TheVariable chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Ohhh, the arguments just go in circles, don't they?
Jillian Leonhart chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Nyahahaha!

It's fun watching those two at the beach, just 'chatting' like that XD
XBadxSassX chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
This is cute :)
Uncertain Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
COOL!
angelitaramos2102 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Hahaha I luv this story it made me crack up so much!
EggshellInk chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Throw me a life saver, because I think I'm drowning in fluff! And that is by no means a bad thing. I positively adore how the story was entirely dialouge. (excluding the bold, but I really liked those too) You are such a fabulous author!
alchemichelper101 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
OH I so love this dialog stories. It makes my imagination work to its best. :D
paranaoblue chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
That thing had me laughing almost the whole time! The way you wrote the conversation was great! And the sunburn...that was really adorable! _
Veechan Desu chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
It was really cute and funny! You could actually make more of it. If it was planned to be a one-shot, you could possibly make a sequel, like what happens when the guys staring come up to them. Omigosh..I'm pushing you, sorry. It's only a suggestion! Really great tho'!
FlightlessBird1122 chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
hahaha love it!
My koala-llama chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
haha~

love it, that was good and it was cute how Soul avoided stuff with the ''no comment'' reply~
Poolday chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
ARG, THIS IS SO FUNNY XD

I actually tried to do this once but it became all jumbled up.

Do you mind if I try it out again, and post it up?

I kinda feel like Im 'taking' youre idea, and I would like to have your permission first.

It IS going to be a MakaXSoul (as I intended to do in the first place) so get back to me as soon as you can!

THANKS!

PD
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