|Reviews for The Great Escape|
| yolo me chapter 2 . 8/25/2012
please make the third chaper soon! cant wait to read it!
| ReachingForTheStars chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
No worries Erin. Take your time with it. Battles are really hard to write, I can't say I blame you about wanting to re-write it. And you're writing it with EarthBolt100? He's a great author. I know this story will be awesome, just because two awesome writers are writing it. And you don't need to apologize. Believe me, we all understand. Writing hasn't exactly been at the top of your list. Don't rush yourself to get this up. D
| xPikachu-Princessx chapter 4 . 6/7/2010
I won't plead for you to update because I read on your profile that it angers you. I feel the same way when people urge me to update soon. ANYWAY! I like the start of this a lot. It has a good plot and I don't think I've seen this kind of story before. Glad to see you are a Pearlshipper and you hate Pokeshipping. I'm the same xD I like your fic Ice Box too! I'm going to check out the rest of your fics tomorrow because you are a good writer :) I know this is on haitus but I just wanted to tell you that I hope you don't give up on this, because you had readers who love it :)
| Lanii-Chan chapter 4 . 5/28/2010
please continue it.. cant wait for the next chapter hahahha :)
| ReachingForTheStars chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
Sounds like a very interesting story. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter.
| patri-300 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Great first chapter! o.o may was a surprise. who will win?
| Aoi Hyoudou chapter 4 . 3/10/2010
Hate Misty. (
| Aman-duhh chapter 4 . 2/18/2010
I just read this whole story and I have to say, I really enjoyed it. Uh oh, Misty's here and it seems like she wants Ash, poor Dawn. I'm a Misty fan but I don't think I'm gonna like her much in this story since it seems she's gonna be competing against Dawn for Ash (Dawn had better win, I'm a huge Pearlshipper). Either way, this is a great story and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep the great work up D
| Mizz Nikki chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
Awesome Chapter Erin :)
Uh oh, Misty's here :( I already don't like her since it appears to me that she and Dawn will be fighting for Ash in the story.
I really can't wait to find out if Ash and Dawn win the battle festival. I hope they do. No actually, THEY BETTER WIN!
Can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
Nicole aka Oceanus
| AshXDawn4Ever chapter 4 . 2/8/2010
awesome :D I hope you'll update soon x
| Yo momma chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
finally, a great funny story is what I expect coming up. All the character's dialogue were IN CHARACTER. I can't wait for more. I liked the descriptions and the dialogue. You are one great writer. Keep up the great work.
| Mizz Nikki chapter 3 . 2/6/2010
I. Hate. Ursula!
She's such a freaking bitch. I can't believe she actually tried to steal Ash.
Good thing Ash stood up for Dawn. That made me very happy D
Oh perfect, Misty is here. Poor Dawn :(
I can't wait for the next one. Keep it up :)
Nicole aka Oceanus D
| Aoi Hyoudou chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
Ursala is so evil. tyring to steal ash from 0 and to make matters worst, misty is here. Poor Dawn.
Keep up with the good work _
| BattleWithYourHeart chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
awesome twinnie! :)
| gonelikeme chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
Bring Holly back to partener Brock like before