|Reviews for For the Cat|
| RinRin-Chama chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Love the cat scene!
| TNM-Writer chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
"I figured I ought to come back for the cat..."
Laughing so hard at this sentence that Diet Coke shot out of my nose. It burns!
| FaithfulAizen chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Ok I have to say somethings
1st Conrad has no Von
2nd no one calls Gwendal Gwen
but all together the story was really good
| 1sunfun chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
| xXMistressMadHatterXx chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
I loved this immensely! I hope you make another soon!
| sexy Seren chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
| Tricha90 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
So cute !
| Equin chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I enjoyed this story :D!
| YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
How could I have not found this on your account before? I've gone over your stories, I know I have! -clears throat- Anywayz, Loved the story, I kept me giggling, and it was well thought out, really, I was surprised.
| WizardsGirl chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
This is a rather nice fic...Wish it was continued (sigh) Adorable, the scolding of Gunter over the identity of the female kitty. Huggles for you!
| Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
nice really nice...are you going to writte some more?
| Sir Gawain of Camelot chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Oh, this is fun! I like it! Though... I'm a little confused as to the relations. The Black family adopted a Japanese (part Mazoku) witch who married into the Potter family? Is that what happened? Seems like it would be easier to make him related through Jennifer... But then, that loses the Mazoku connection, and Shouma might not be full Japanese, considering that the Mazoku heritage on Earth started in Switzerland.
xD I liked the hinted Gwen/Harry. Had it been more obvious, it would have been moving too fast for people as private as Harry and Gwen are.
Although it was confirmed that Yuuri can speak Japanese while in Shin Makoku at a later point in he story, it's no big deal. And as an even less big deal, it's mentioned in the novels that the language of Shin Makoku has a different grammatical structure than Japanese. Hooray minor details!
xD I wanted to slap Harry on the back and buy him a drink hen he berated Wolfram in the closet. Though he doesn't know the full situation - that Yuuri willfully forgets about the engagement when he isn't reminded - it'd still be a better idea for Wolf to trust Yuuri a bit more. Yuuri's too much of a wimp to start anything, anyway.
It would have been nice to get more than an overview of what was happening. In some ways, this read more as an outline. A whole story condensed into one chapter. What was happening in Shin Makoku at the time? Harry is obviously becoming closer to Gwendal as Gwendal teaches him strategy and gives him gifts, so it would be nice to see that character development happen. The confrontation with Wolfram in the closet would have been even more satisfying if we had felt the drawn out buildup of the tense relationship and fully understood the emotions and motivations of both characters. Harry pulling the knife out to cut Yuuri free from his stirrups would have felt more natural if we'd already known why he had the knife, so you wouldn't have to put in an aside. xD That sort of thing. This chapter could be expanded into ten chapters by adding such details and more carefully developing the relationships!
| Areus Bookworm chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I liked it. There was only one issue I wanted to throttle you over. Conrart (Conrad) is not a lord of the Demon Kingdom since his father is a human. His name is Sir Conrart Weller, NOT Conrart von Weller!
| Crystal Lilac chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
no more chapie?/
| Immortalis Cruor Elf chapter 1 . 11/1/2010