|Reviews for Truths Too Big to be Told|
| RedJane12 chapter 15 . 11/30/2012
Ah Noah Dawson's back! He's kind of creepy but does he deserve to be beaten up by L twice? A bit extreme isn't it? Anyway, perhaps he enjoys that.
Loved Weidman giving Duncan a piece of his mind... Seriously Duncan's all deluded and needs the talk... Kind of making me curious how that will end as he's not making much progress...
| RedJane12 chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Great Dick moments... esp. when he goes from 'I understand that Veronica's pussy entrapped you into having a kiddie party, but how did it become my problem?' to actually having fun playing in the water with the kids...
I liked Meg's insight on the L & V relationship and how much they're prepared to do for each other. Sometimes they forget in the middle of all the fighting...
Great ending with the girls betting... V is one clever girl... I would not bet against her...
| RedJane12 chapter 7 . 11/29/2012
Nice nicknames for L: Logan-the-antichrist-Echolls, Rosemary's Baby: the teenage years, king of the assholes...
Weevil was surprised V did not know about L & the little game of Russian Roulette... I wonder where that is going...
One word for the Mannings (Mr & Mrs) - ubercreepy! I hope the rage of V (and co.) will get to them...
And Marisol's story real heartbreaking... Geez..
| RedJane12 chapter 6 . 11/29/2012
A couple of just genius pieces of dialogue just made me LOVE this chapter for being on the fluffy side (other than that scene of the show with the bikers playing Russian roulette with L)
'L: Who am I to stop an independent woman from doing what she wants?
V: I have a feeling those words will come back to bit you in the ass.'
'L: You know last year when I was telling everyone what bitch you were? I think I was onto something.
V: You love me. Bitchyness and all.
L: I'm doomed.'
| RedJane12 chapter 5 . 11/29/2012
Loved that scene of V watching the video then talking (etc) with L - it was emotional, sensual and brought up the issues they are struggling with. I really liked that it showed how they got to a better place by the end but that the issues are deep-seated and so, they won't just go away. Great input from Alicia trying to temper V's good intentions to sort it all out with logic.
Great to see Cliff too - he's awesome!
| RedJane12 chapter 4 . 11/29/2012
It is a scientific impossibility not to be amused at L's discomfort having to learn the Dirty Dancing dance... V is so right on this one... Loved the line from the dance teacher 'Veronica, you just need to remember one thing: (she grins) let Logan lead' - she doesn't know V very well...
Great way of showing L & V's learning to deal with 'truths' by having them fighting over the video but still getting over it (at least temporarily) to deal with a genuine problem when Meg's sister is hospitalised.
| RedJane12 chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
This chapter was full of sweet touching moments- V & Weevil sort of burying the hatchet (a bit), Meg dressing Mac as a girly girl, Dick's horror at changing baby nappies, Alicia and Keith witnessing V's reaction to seeing the baby chair L had bought, V's enjoyment of L's having lost his bet and having to dance ...
| RedJane12 chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
Great scene of L & V meeting Matt the neighbour... Some things never change like V being suspicious and submitting the neighbour to FBI-like interrogation and L's jealousy triggered by just about any male... Of course V hiding her investigation into Marisol Reyes' disappearance is very much in character...
Sweet scene at the Fennel's kitchen with L's unsuccessful attempt to appear domestic... Hilarious...
Loved the title too!
| RedJane12 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I was so glad when I finished Some Truths Hurt that the sequel was already there! I could not wait to see how L & V got their relationship back on track. Really great idea to have the car accident story to re-create the Neptune 'class wars' without Logan being in as much trouble. Loved that the story jumps into a first scene of confrontation between L & V already dealing with their trust issues... and that the bottom line at the end is positive. Logan's line 'I'm trying to decide if I should be angry that you doubted that I kept my word or happy that you stayed with me despite the fact that you doubted me' kind of embodied for me the state of their relationship as work on progress... From sneaking around (so funny!) to the very touching scene in Aaron's den.
Great use of flashbacks to get the story moving but providing the background at the same time.
| Z chapter 14 . 11/14/2012
So my goal was to write 26 reviews 1 for every letter of the alphabet...im not sure how well that worked but if you don't already realize it your an amazzing! writer and i love your story
| X chapter 13 . 11/14/2012
No! Dick can't go back to being a womanizing Ass!
| Y chapter 12 . 11/14/2012
Poor Veronica having to be guilty about dating Lily's Ex.
| W chapter 11 . 11/13/2012
Yes! She's finally in charge.
| V chapter 10 . 11/13/2012
| U chapter 9 . 11/13/2012
the bets are hilarious!